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for One More Night

by Neci

schedule July 25, 2020 at 12:00 AM

Well written, great descriptive sex, but a tad ‘fan-fiction interruptus’. There is more to the HG story that needs to be resolved, the author hints at it and puts it in the minds of the characters, but doesn’t resolve it.  Harry & Ginny scratch each other’s itch, and then once they both cum, it’s over.  There should be a little more than that, they both mean more to each other, and we (and they) know it.  Better edited than many of the posts on this site. 

schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hehe great story.
person AttackSkwirl
schedule March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
uh huh... I'm rooming with a pervert, but one who can write a lemon well! It was good, really (not just saying that so I dun get my ass kicked). It makes me wanna read the rest of the story you had going.
person Trecklar
schedule February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I need a smoke. Damn that was hot!

Do I get milk with the cookies?