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February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
don't forget that you have to be registered to leave review now. This is probally why you are not getting a lot of reviews. This is a good fic. Hope you update soon.
schedule
February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well here is my review saying that I like your fic so far and would love to see it continued. If a beta is what you need then just email me and I will be willing to start immediatly. I love being a beta just as much as I love writing. And don't give up because of a lack of reviews.
Ja ne
Kireania
ps. you might want to add a small summary so people know what they are reading about.
Ja ne
Kireania
ps. you might want to add a small summary so people know what they are reading about.
schedule
February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Why the flash of pain from Hermione? Need chapter 4!
schedule
February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Funny, I always serve quiche straight out of the oven. Maybe I'm just weird? Anyway, an interesting beginning, looking forward to more of this one. Funny how it's Hermione instead of Ron who's being louder in her protests about Harry looking for Draco.
~Catstaff
~Catstaff
schedule
February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ch4: Interesting ideas. Why is Hermione hurt - just because Harry heated the quiche, or was Ron not able to do it for himself? The last part of chapter 4 is a little hard to read. If you have time, breaking it up into smaller paragraphs would really help.
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February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo can't wait for chapter 5! Wouldn't it be funny if Graham is actually Draco?
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February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 3! Will Harry do it? What secrets does Draco hold?