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February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good start. I do hope you continue.
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February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
War makes people do things they wouldn't do in other times, and you've shown it nicely, as you've shown not everything is white or black.
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February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great first chapter! I can't wait to read more.
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February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hate to get interested in a first chapter story, but you've got my interest. Hope to see a lot more chapters coming up. Very good chapter;)
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February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! I hope you continue this.
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February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent start, I can't wait to see what develops.
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February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I do hope that you continue. Quickly!
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February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have a sad weakness for hurt/comfort stories and this first chapter sucked me right in. Please do continue -- I'm hoping this isn't a one-shot, even though it is so nicely arc'ed that it could work as one.