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by ShinigamiClara

person In2Deep
schedule February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Darn! this looks like a good fic up-date it soon!
schedule February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am very, very intrigued to see where you are planning on taking this story. That was an excellent first chapter, and I'm definitely looking forward to more. Cross-dressing!Harry is always fun to read about, and Snape's and Harry's reactions will be quite interesing! :D

If you're still having trouble finding a beta, send me an email. I've beta'd several Snarry fics before, and I'd love to help you out if you need it.
person Lucy
schedule February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay... so I'm not sure why I read this.
I don't usually go for the silly crazy out of the world type scenarios...
but of some reason this one caught my eye.
And I'm glad it did.
I find myself very intruiged.

I was sure there was going to be a "Hello Harry..." at the very end, and I was a little sad when there wasn't.
I love Snape when he's ahead of the game.
While having Snape think Harry's a pretty girl might be very funny, I don't feel like it's very true to his character.
I feel like he's smart enough to notice little male-type signs like large adam apples and things...

OOOOH! Maybe he could pretend like he thinks Harry's a girl, but then it turns out that he knew he was Harry the whole time!
That'd be great!

Lol... sorry, you can write it however you want... I'm just excited at the possibilities.
person Sakya
schedule February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Way cool so far.

I take Vernon has no idea that Harry is a singer at the bar. Let's hope he doesn't find out. Can a 15 year old work on a bar? and at night?

What will Snape do?

Please continue it soon.

schedule February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A most excellent story and I can't wait to see what happens next! Keep up the wonderful work!~Sophia
person Hambares
schedule February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More soon? I like the first two chapters! I am interested in how Snape will react to Harry's story.
person In2Deep
schedule February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
6:02 AM.... wow your up-early! hope that i can do that one of these days! but an intresting explination! does Harry only work durning the summers or is he out of school now? and why should he be staying at the Dursleys if hes out of school? the time line is a little confusing? could you maybe put it in order for me? hope that you up-dates soon!
person sanda
schedule February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it, bye
person vyator
schedule February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So cool! Loving it, can't wait to read more!
person Lucy
schedule February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
heh heh
You explained that pretty well
This story just makes me smile and smile.
Oh my god, please hurry up and write more.