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for Never A Memory

by Dotowe

person Dezra
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
GAH, you have me hanging on to every word. Can't wait for more.
person QueenB
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 49 I haven't read any of the HP books except the first one so some of the allusions here escape me. The identities of Rita Skeeter and Dolores Umbridge remain ciphers, filled in only by your references to them here. Therefore I've no clue why Umbridge hates Harry so much; guess I'll have to read the books for that.

But the tension in this scene is gripping and believable from beginning to end. I didn't think Harry could be called to the stand since his "love affair" with Draco is irrelevant to the very real threat that Maul poses. But it looked dicey there for a moment. Thanks for ending this on such a cliffhanger.

As for your question about Father Alt... Well, I thought it was strange for him to take comfort from Draco merely because Draco can't really be seen as the comforting sort. I think of people like Ron Weasley's mother in those roles. However, I can see where they would feel a strange kinship. In their way, they both have demons to fight.

Cat makes a good point. Cruent was killed after Draco was infected with Maul, wasn't he? Maybe I'm forgetting that. When stories run on this long, crucial points from earlier chapters will elude my memory.
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i need more so excited when draco came out the shadows.hahha bitch umbridge!
schedule December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I thank you for your kind words! I sooo need chapter 50! Harry's friends were stalling for Draco but what did he find? Will Draco finally get Delores out of Harry's hair? That woman drives me nuts! Too bad the Centaurs didn't finish what they started!
person gage
schedule December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I need more... pleas, please update soon.
loving the story gloria!
person Paige Taylor
schedule December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loving it Keep Going!!!!!! Hope the next ones out soon!!!
person genxster
schedule December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. The birthday present was a nice touch. I love their dynamic in this story. It's much more interesting to keep them separate and let them both handle their more pressing business instead of having them jump each other's bones every other chapter. That's a pet peeve of mine.

Can't wait to see the results of Draco's evil plan. I knew he couldn't be so passive for much longer.

Not being that coherent. It's late, but I wanted you to know how much I enjoyed the chapter. As always, I am anxiously awaiting the next installment.
schedule December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 49!!! Draco isn't the correct host? I sooo need more!
person Anon
schedule December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahh..........*runs around in circles screaming*...I'm sooooofrantic over what's gonna happen next...OMG...lol. You write well and keep your reader entranced. And like every good author, you leave us willing to strangle you if you don't update quickly :P.
person QueenB
schedule December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 48 Exorcism? Ho boy, that makes me uneasy on so many levels. Even if Draco chooses to fight, demons have a way of picking up and exploiting people's fears and insecurities--something Draco can relate to. Father Alt has been out of the game for such a long time; that's bound to make him shaky. It's odd for him to take comfort from someone like Draco. Let's hope that it helps.

I think it's rather shabby of Draco to think of Harry's refusal to see him as cowardice. After the accusation from the Ministry, Harry may have decided it's better for him to stay away from Draco for now. Why fuel that fire?