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Now that was just evil!!! Leaving it there like that!!! Building up the atmosphere and then making us wait just as eveything is about to go to shit! (excuse my language) But still Brilliant chapter and im in agony waiting for the next one!! Toodles! Paige Taylor

Ch. 55 I can't believe that Harry would actually talk to Maul. It's like Father Alt says: the man has no sense. I really don't know how they intend to keep the Ministry from finding out about the involvement with the Muggles. In a way, it makes no sense. They can't associate with Muggles in order to evacuate them but they can allow them to be overtaken by the plagues? Why? Don't they think the Muggles will notice something supernatural is going on? (Perhaps the people in the magic world hope the Muggles will just come up with a really great explanation...like the end of the world.)

nice update, although its a cliffie! neways, i understand the typos, but u make the same one over again. the way youre usin the word, youre supposed to say 'vial' not 'vile'(homonyms are a bitch,too). 'vial' for a bottle, 'vile' for loathesome or evil. i think hermione wouldve used it when she punched malfoy in the PoA movie, but i think "you foul, loathesome, evil little cockroach" worked just fine ;) keep up the great work! :D

pretty intense chapter! I hope Maul burns in a jellylike hell! Update soon!!

aaaaaahhhhh, Im so glad you decided to update. I was afraid it would take months. Anyhoo, I loved this too, it just kills me that the updates are not like...every 10 seconds or so. But yeah, loving it as usual, so keep up the good work and update soon

omg i need more!

LOL told you it works!!!!! Another brilliant update, im getting goosebumps just thinking about the climax of getting rid of Maul!!!! The smacking thing was really funny i was giggling loudly reading it!! My family now think im insane laughing at my computer!! Go figure!! Update soon!!!

OMFG, YOU HAVE GOT TO UPDATE THIS A.S.A.P.
Oh man this is just too beautifull. Im Loving this forver, please upate soon

omg harry. loved it!

All I can say is, WOW! The scene in Ch 54 between Maul/draco and harry is just so well done. My heart actually sped up while reading it.

I also love Harry's thoughts at the end. Personal indeed!!