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for Never A Memory

by Dotowe

person gage
schedule January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! I don't want it to ennnnnnnnndddddddddddd.
god I was so hooked on this story and I am so sad that it had to end. that being said, it was a great story and ending. Alas, all great things must come to an end.
person Riley
schedule January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow.
that was a fantastic story.
your a great writer.
and considering this was your first HP fanfic you did exellently :]
ill be sure to read everything else you write !
x
schedule January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it was fantastic ending thanks!
person Carmila
schedule January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Bravo *claps*. This story has been amazing. I really like your style. It almost made me cry there at the end. Good choice on the lyrics.
person Mylor
schedule January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
bravo! ;-)
person MeLaiya
schedule January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aaaahhh, I so did not see this coming. I loved this, Ill always keep an eye out for your work. *Mwah!!!*
person Melha Seraphim
schedule January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lol. I'm glad you enjoy my reviews. Since I stopped writing fanfics I just review others >_>.

I'm sad to see your fic done, but I loved it all. Beginning to End. And thank you for basically leaving the themes in it open to some interpretation. I don't always like having something crammed down my throat...except this really tasty cake one time. It had sprinkle frosting. Oh! And I loved how you added in 'the new slytherian prince'. I enjoyed seeing how people treated Draco after the exorcism. The mixture of 'awe and eww, and the phhft yeah rights.' Also so very grateful that not everything was sunshine rainbows and puppies with Harry and Draco's relationship. They've been through a lot, together and separately. It kinda bugs me in fics when they just are all "lalala I have my one true love everythings good~" Ya know? Fluff should stay in marshmallows.

I hope to see more of your writing in the future!

person QueenB
schedule January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
CH. 59 The scene in the cafe was amusing but I saw it as signs that Draco is getting old...oops, I mean mature. After all, only the mature complain about the natural exuberance of the young. :P

Ha! The ending was surprising...and surprisingly funny. Draco isn't often taken by surprise and he must have been entirely gobsmacked at finding himself being so honored. That kiss at the end was so perfect and right; I could almost hear the trumpets and violins playing.

Thanks for a ripping epic. I was surprised to see that this is your only HP story but I'm certain there will be more in the future.
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't want this to end!!! OMG!!! That was beautiful! (Sorry about my absence! I got behind on my reading due to family and the holidays. They wouldn't let me near my computer!) I am sooo going to miss this story! One day... one day you should write a one shot to show them sometime in the future. How are they? What are they doing? I sooo don't want to say goodbye to this story!!! I want a chapter 60 and 61 and so on and so forth.... *sniff*
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah that would have been amusing to see my name in a fic! I know what you are talking about too dont wory love! I know the whole story behind the name.....soooo.....*cracks whip* My epilogue?! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Don't lie you like it! You want me to whip you! MWAHAHAHAHAHA! anyway I loved this chapter! I like how you made Draco smell...I had heard that before. that people who have been blessed with God's grace smell like that! Or that the smell lingers around where God visited them! thats too cool! I am so sad to see this over. It seems like just yesterday you started it and now its over....It was an excellent fic and I applaud you on it! thank you so much!