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March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well this chapter wasn't what I was expecting. Don't get me wrong I liked it I was just hoping a little more fighting and a little more make out scenes. You know the whole fight and make out sex thingy. Still I enjoyed this chapter as well. Please review soon. *__*
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March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was by far the best chapter yet. You can't see it but there are tears on my mouse pad.
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March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sleep, what's that? *laughs*.
That pair of guys can be so dramatic, but they managed to create a wonderful, dramatic chapter and with your warnings, it seems like the next one will be pretty charged too!.
The plot is evolving so nicely (or darkly?, I don't know ^^) that Draco's stay in America looks like a distant memory of a totally alternate universe. Things are getting very interesting now!. Harry's so unbalanced that I don't know what to expect from him, looks like it'll be right to expect the worst... By the way, we're severely lacking in Harry's POV since the 'Draco Malfoy is too close for comfort' debacle!. Who knows what kind of idiocy he's thinking right now! (surely Draco will want to know, too. Yup).
With 'Redeem me' finished today, your fic is one of the few things that are keeping me conected to the HP fandom and stopping me from the final leapt into the yaoi dreamland *grins*. Keep the good work!.
That pair of guys can be so dramatic, but they managed to create a wonderful, dramatic chapter and with your warnings, it seems like the next one will be pretty charged too!.
The plot is evolving so nicely (or darkly?, I don't know ^^) that Draco's stay in America looks like a distant memory of a totally alternate universe. Things are getting very interesting now!. Harry's so unbalanced that I don't know what to expect from him, looks like it'll be right to expect the worst... By the way, we're severely lacking in Harry's POV since the 'Draco Malfoy is too close for comfort' debacle!. Who knows what kind of idiocy he's thinking right now! (surely Draco will want to know, too. Yup).
With 'Redeem me' finished today, your fic is one of the few things that are keeping me conected to the HP fandom and stopping me from the final leapt into the yaoi dreamland *grins*. Keep the good work!.
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March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I certainly did enjoy the update. and that kiss, wow! you write very passionatly, I really did feel like I was there watching! keep the good stuff coming! x
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March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need ch 24! They just can't do it! No matter how hard they try! Oh this chapter broke my heart!
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March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Do you honestly think I'm daft?
I obviously know they're all gay -.-
and YOUR MEAN!!! I WANT MORE T_T
anywho I'm lonesome and the story was great but I can relate to Draco a bit to well.
So have fun and such ^^
I obviously know they're all gay -.-
and YOUR MEAN!!! I WANT MORE T_T
anywho I'm lonesome and the story was great but I can relate to Draco a bit to well.
So have fun and such ^^
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March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 24--OH. MY. GOD. Breathe, breathe, breathe! Excuse me while I hyperventilate over here...YOU ARE BLOODY FUCKING BRILLIANT! OH FUCK this was a good chapter! Alright, so right now, I have a full-blown ear infection (in each ear), a cold that brings a wracking cough, sore throat, and lots of mucus...I tell you this because when Harry started signing his name, I was rocking back and forth, whispering hoarsely, "nonononono" and then when he tore it up, I jumped up and was like "YES"...still hoarse!
And then when he went upstairs and found Draco......my heart twisted and broke! And the way you wrote Harry reviving him!!! OH. MY. GOD. That was amazing! I was screaming in my head, "GodDAMNit, Draco, live!" and then Harry said pretty much the same thing! *eeeeeeeeeee* and then when Draco was like "I've got you..." I was ready to cry!!!!
All that to say FUCKING AWESOME CHAPTER!!!!! Seriously, I think this is the best chapter I've read since the end of "Redeem Me". And now the "groundwork" is laid for their relationship....right? RIGHT? Now we can get to the "good stuff"!!!! Now I need Chapter 25 and badly!!!!!
And then when he went upstairs and found Draco......my heart twisted and broke! And the way you wrote Harry reviving him!!! OH. MY. GOD. That was amazing! I was screaming in my head, "GodDAMNit, Draco, live!" and then Harry said pretty much the same thing! *eeeeeeeeeee* and then when Draco was like "I've got you..." I was ready to cry!!!!
All that to say FUCKING AWESOME CHAPTER!!!!! Seriously, I think this is the best chapter I've read since the end of "Redeem Me". And now the "groundwork" is laid for their relationship....right? RIGHT? Now we can get to the "good stuff"!!!! Now I need Chapter 25 and badly!!!!!
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March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Poor Draco. I Had a feeling that he was going to do something stupid, but I didn't think that he was going to try to commit suicide. I hope Harry and Draco now start to have a more friendly relationship. With their usual bantering's like always but with a little more teasing behind it and a little less......... You now what? Screw that. There is to much sexual tension between them just have them fuck their brains out. That would be a lot easier.( Grinning here) ^_^
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March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I giggled- GIGGLED!- when I oppened the link to the new chapter and saw the dedicatory, thank you! *blushes*. I'm feeling kinda flustered right now, the chapter was awesome! ^-^.
You were right, Harry's POV worked very well and the insight into his thoughts and feelings is very much appreciated, I understood better his character and can relate him with ye olde Hogwarts!Harry now. He's really changed but deep-deep inside is still the same, if you know what I mean ^^.
Draco, baby, what happened to you?! *sobs*. Gods, it was totally, absolutely unexpected!, I was voting for a temper tantrum or a self-deprecating depression but to go to that lenght... Let's not say that Draco Malfoy's temper doesn't flare in big, dramatic fashion!. He wants to deny his Mark= he goes and slashes his arm; he want to save Harry= he steals a time turner and spends four years brewing a potion; he wants to recover his memory= he starts a magic disturbance of epic propotions; etc, etc. Poor Draco, I hope he's ok *pets Draco*.
Oh yeah, another cracking, sparkly magical energy thingie! *grins*. And the bond is doing strange things again... plotwise, it's a very handy tool you clever author you ^^. And you finally got Harry and Draco together in bed! (it could have been a lot less traumatic but, well... :P).
It's really fun to write long reviews (I'm writing a scientific paper, my PhD thesis, my LJ and a lame fic too, but this is my fav exercise to practice my written-english skills!), and now that "Double-Edged Sword", "The Copper Cauldron", "Appearances" and "Learning Life Over" are finished you have (almost) my whole commenting-attention. Poor you, you'll have to cope with me for a little while longer...
'till next chapter,
~wiz~
You were right, Harry's POV worked very well and the insight into his thoughts and feelings is very much appreciated, I understood better his character and can relate him with ye olde Hogwarts!Harry now. He's really changed but deep-deep inside is still the same, if you know what I mean ^^.
Draco, baby, what happened to you?! *sobs*. Gods, it was totally, absolutely unexpected!, I was voting for a temper tantrum or a self-deprecating depression but to go to that lenght... Let's not say that Draco Malfoy's temper doesn't flare in big, dramatic fashion!. He wants to deny his Mark= he goes and slashes his arm; he want to save Harry= he steals a time turner and spends four years brewing a potion; he wants to recover his memory= he starts a magic disturbance of epic propotions; etc, etc. Poor Draco, I hope he's ok *pets Draco*.
Oh yeah, another cracking, sparkly magical energy thingie! *grins*. And the bond is doing strange things again... plotwise, it's a very handy tool you clever author you ^^. And you finally got Harry and Draco together in bed! (it could have been a lot less traumatic but, well... :P).
It's really fun to write long reviews (I'm writing a scientific paper, my PhD thesis, my LJ and a lame fic too, but this is my fav exercise to practice my written-english skills!), and now that "Double-Edged Sword", "The Copper Cauldron", "Appearances" and "Learning Life Over" are finished you have (almost) my whole commenting-attention. Poor you, you'll have to cope with me for a little while longer...
'till next chapter,
~wiz~
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March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YOU SCARED ME HALF TO DEATH!! But then you gave a little sweetness at the end. So all is forgiven. I <3 sweetness.