rate_review Reviews

loved the chapter...i wish harry would come for e too...i

I really injoy your writing style. I am a creative writing student, and am very gratefull thta you understande the preservation of characters that are not your own. I am on chapter ten of Never a Memory and I wanted to comend you on you ability to set up a story and you knowlege of the functions and plotlines of stories. I wanted to ask you:

A. Have you done any creative works basid soley on your own creation.
B. Have you studied the nature of story and plot and charcter at some point... If not I am amazed. Your talent is that of studied writer and while I would cation some small spelling errors and little tidbits along the way I do believe you have the talent to write well and eventuall become published.
C. I work for a literary journal and if you have any short fiction of such nature have you been inclided to punblish?

If you have questions feel free to e-mail me at rione_of_darkness@yahoo.com or jbibb@bpc.edu

"There's nothing so bad that a little guilt won't make worse...and there's nothing so good a little guilt won't make better"
I know i've heard this before and it makes me want to shoot myself in the foot but I can't for the life of me place the quote.... Asistance would be pleasurable!

Thank you

Wow, I'm realy enjoying your story! There are very few fics out there that grab my imagination and this one has. Question: Is Deans making another appearance or was he just a one shot thing. I must admit I love it when Harry gets jealous. ;)

Chapter 24
cooL! I like the little suicide attempt with Draco. Harry really just cares for him a lot, kinda reminded me with Tim and Dillon ;) 'Breathe!'
hehe
It's starting to get a lil' kinky there hmmmm how far does you kinkyness goes? don't know if I wanna know... :)
Awesome how the plot is flowing and unfolding!

as usual, your updates were awesome. i love the lil nickelback lyric u had in there. theyre my fave band. do u like them a lot as well, or u just liked the quote?

those last chapters were great! very intense in more ways then one.
draco seems to like going to extreems to prove his point. but at least it showed harry didnt want him to die.
and the smut scene was really well done i cant pick any part of it that i didnt like equally. mind you, there is something very intimate about asking someone to come for you. i realy liked it
cant wait to see what happens next

well... let me just say...

... THAT WAS BLOODY BRILLIANT!!!

I can't believe it...

I read your story for three hours straight and I must say your writing skills are simply spectacular!

Why can't we have more writers like you I wonder?

And more stories like this?

:P

Very well written... I'll be waiting for more!

~harlequin

Chapter 25--no one can make me stop breathing like you can. OHGODOHGODOHGODOHGOD Now that the Harry/Draco goodness is here, I can't handle it!!!! THAT WAS SO FUCKING HOTTTTTTTT! I really feel bad for repeating myself in every frickin review, but OH. MY. GOD. I love having a "dialogue" with the author through reviews and such, so YIPPEE! Thanks, I hope I get better soon, too. And that story, whoa...what an inspiration, though!

Harry was like "We can't..." and I was like, "WHO CARES????? THIS IS WHAT I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR!!!! JUST DO IT!!!!" (Harry and Draco are the ultimate Nike poster-boys...hahahahahahhahahaha)

And WOWOWOWOWOWWOWOWOWOWOW what a twist with Harry being the more experienced one!! I suppose I should've seen it coming (*unladylike snort*) because usually Draco is the Sex God and Harry is the virgin! Nice twist!

When Draco came...and Harry didn't...I was like, "What?" and then it just seemed to realistic....and then I was like, "ATTA BOY, DRACO!" and Draco's issues with vulnerability.....OH I just want to squeeze him!

AND NOW THEY'RE SLEEPING TOGETHER!!!!!! EEEEEEEEEEEEEEE I can die happily! Of course, if I DID die, there would be Internet wherever I go so that I could continue reading this "from beyond" :)

GOOD CHAPTER! (<-- understatement)

chater 26

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WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.. must say. those two are just purely sexy.