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for Never A Memory

by Dotowe

person graballz
schedule March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 26--Okay, reviewing as I read again (watch out, danger ahead and you don't have to respond to everything...a lot of this is just me being a dork and typing the first thing that comes to mind without editing for content lol)

Harry slept in the STUDY???? *sigh* They're being more difficult than I anticipated...but WHY??? They are DISTANT?? FUCK! Someone lock them in the closet so that hot gay teen sex can occur! GRRRRRRR As much as I want them to be together, I can understand why they are reluctant, even though it makes me want to bash their heads together! lol

NO, BABIES! *GASP* DON'T FIGHT THE ATTRACTION! YOU CAN'T! IT'S TOO STRONG! (right? RIGHT? It HAS to be too strong!) *whimper* This isn't sounding good! My poor Draco! YES, YES YOU CAN TRUST HARRY! YOU CAN DO IT, DRACO!!!!

haha Pure Draco.....shamefully directly every comment back to the fact that he spent the night in bed ALONE! ALONE GODDAMNIT!

OH NO! Draco, you can save Harry from being "made" into the next Voldie!

*SCREAMING IN FRUSTRATION* jkl;ajbioasfnbarweuo ngwrgaois;igo;sn8p9ehrt ; <-- my frustration over Harry not "wanting" to sleep with Draco cuz he's a virgin (I completely understand) and his comment in the silence "so seduce me" HE JUST GAVE YOU THE GREEN LIGHT, DRACO!!!!! YOU CAN TRUST HIM!!!!!! GO FOR IT!!!!!

Wait, wait, Deans is a WIZARD?? oh shit (I don't know WHY that gives me the creeps, but just OH SHIT!) OH SHIT IS RIGHT!!! FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK why do I get the feeling that's going to be bad for my babies??

*SQUEAKING WITH HAPPINESS* YAY Harry went to Draco's room in the middle of the night!!! EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE YAY! YES YES YES YES YES I'm doing a little happy dance!!!!

I know this was a fucking long review. YAY for Draco being a Sex God!!! That is very true (Draco giving Harry a look and Harry's in bed with him) Draco's irresistible!! (but then again, so's Harry! SO WHY ARE THEY RESISTING EACH OTHER? LOL GRRRR) And yes, I know what you mean. It's just that...I guess I just assume that Draco is experienced, so it was a nice surprise/plot twist/change for HIM to be the virgin! LMAO I am SOOOOO looking forward to Harry teaching him!
person graballz
schedule March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Son of a bitch, it cut the rest of my goddamn long-ass review off! FUUUUUUUCK Alright, I'll try to recreate it:

"Seduce me" Ooooooooh, that sent shivers down my spine! Why do I get the feeling Draco will be up for that challenge? hahahahahahahaha

Deans is a WIZARD? OH SHIT! This is BAD (or will be for Harry and Draco...I think!)

YAY, HARRY! He went to Draco's bedroom in the middle of the night! GOOD SIGN!!!!! YAY for cuddling!

I understand what you're saying about Draco basically needing to be a virgin for this story. It's just that I'm so used to him being experienced (glad to know he's still a Sex God anyway! lmao) that him being a virgin was a nice surprise/plot twist/change! And I am SO looking forward to Harry teaching him! YUM! They'll let themselves go and love each other! I JUST KNOW IT
person HellishMind
schedule March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I really liked this chapter. Is Deans a good or bad guy? I'll just have to wait and see. I just love it that Harry plays so hard to get, but really he's just dying for it. And DAMN is that Draco a great seducer or what? Love it.
person Jien
schedule March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hahaha! uodate soon!
person Jan
schedule March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Deans a wizard? And who is that mysterious man? Does he have anything to do with Draco sleep walking (if you could call it that)? Why is Draco spacing out at night(sleep walking)? AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH! This story is getting more and more interesting. Please update soon. ^_^
person kittycat30
schedule March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Still loving it!
person Yanic
schedule March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just stumbled across this gem this evening, wonderfully done! I really like the storyline and the characterizations. Can't wait to see where you go with this.
person Zypher
schedule March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! ~Falls out of the chair of death blonde bangs falling into face, blowing them out of the way~
okay at least this Doctor Mom is hot
But Horse Powers god father is SIRIUS not SEVEROUS! xD
Doctor mom's God gather is SEVEROUS
Think of this Severous Snape goes to the ever snicky snickering blonde male who is in SLYTHERIN
and that Sirius Black is the serious black haired male that Harry had as a family member to his own 'siriously black' and hurt heart...
I wounder if that is a good way of remembring :D
Anyways I loved the chapter and it was great, yes I had snickered at your typo ^^
Loves yous.. >:D<
person Dotowe
schedule March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*ducks* WOOPS! Thanx, Zypher; I fixed it. No idea what the hell I was thinkin'... Nice catch, Zypher!
person Zypher
schedule March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I MISS YOUR WORK... I have bad news to tell you
NEED TO TALK TO YOU BADLY!~