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Brilliant! Is there a way to track your story so I know when it updates? I can't find that function within this site.

Keep up the good work.

wow you took me in quite a ride with this story. And i'm sure this is still the beginning. i always like adventure/mystery solving fic. and although harry and draco physical relationship happens quite early in the fic, their feelings are surprisingly developed more coutiously (you can see lots doubt and fear there, it feels real to me, love it). Can't wait to see whats next you'll bring in the story, i very much enjoys the challenge in guessing the plot, saying "i knew it" if i'm right and gasp in surprise if i'm wrong :).

wow it took me awile to read all the chapters
but is is very very good story and i really hope they can defeat
the graet darness and safe draco.
keep going and post sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon
bye bye

*fangirly squeee*

Finally got to the end (so far) of this story, and must say it's cracking.
For something to be this LONG... and still not only has my attention, but also wailed when there was no more 'Next Chapter' link, mus mean there's the little extra here which separates the men from the mice. ;)

Lovely story, paws crossed for the happy ending so many of us are suckers for. ^^
Looking forward to the next installment! Keep up the good work.

Oh the torture! when do we get chapter 40? lol

nnnnnnnnnnnoooo nononononononononono! it actually took me five whole days to read all of the amazing story so far and now there's no more amazing story to read! *pouts* pwease oh pwease fix this earth-shattering ordeal for me by updating soon! *kisses* (geez dramatic much?!)

I'm really enjoying this fic! You really mined the characters depths, and have a well thought out story it seems. I don't know if I'm following all the details, but it's a lovely story :D keep on updating. (oh and cheers to you for responding to so many reviewers!)

Oh my. That chapter was way too short. I wish I could give you a marvelously detailed review, but I read all 39 chapters in like three days. I'm actually going to start over and read it again. I love this story. You flesh out Draco really well. I love the irony of him being this big hero but not able to swagger about it. I like that you kept Draco's edge, not have him melt into this crazy Harry worshipper. Oh and emotionally damaged Harry having to learn how to trust and love. OMG! Well, this is probably incoherent, but I just had to let you know how much I appreciate your story, your cleverness and your writing talent. This is a really well plotted story, the tension between H/D really works. There is so much they have to deal with besides the obvious problem of Draco encompassing all evil. I also like how you continue to include Ron and Hermione and give them real work to do. Often in these kinds of stories they act only as placeholders and are quite wasted in the story.

Okay, gushing over. If I can't leave you an intelligent review, at least it is a glowing one. Keep up the excellent work! :o)

Sooo need chapter 40!!! Is the potion truly working? Will Mael become immune to it?

Harry needs to stop being a scare little boy, and start realizing that all these shit he's been doing for Draco, had been out of love, and also out of worry of losing him. Poor Draco, he's feel unloved, and unwanted. Hopefully that last little info about whom requested for him to have this room will help a bit.

Please update soon ^_^