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November 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
where's Bellatrix in this?!
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March 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like it alot! I usually dont read pureblood Hermione cuz she usually ends up blaise's sister with a different name. but this one i really like. i hope you continue with it.
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November 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am confused. When you say silver and chrome do you mean silver and silver? Chrome is usually the silver hue metal takes. I am trying to picture the room. Sorry it is a small point but it caught my eye. Thanks!
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November 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great fic!
I think Hermione should forgive Harry and turn to the side of light bringing Draco with her... or even if she doesn't forgive Harry, because he was a tool!.. I really can't see her fighting for Voldemort, she would still want equal rights for muggleborns, and still love her muggle adoptive parents.
anyway, that's my view, but whatever you do, I hope you update soon!
I think Hermione should forgive Harry and turn to the side of light bringing Draco with her... or even if she doesn't forgive Harry, because he was a tool!.. I really can't see her fighting for Voldemort, she would still want equal rights for muggleborns, and still love her muggle adoptive parents.
anyway, that's my view, but whatever you do, I hope you update soon!
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November 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story.
I'm a sucker for the 'dark side' not being as it actually seems. You've already inferred, pretty heavily that Hermione takes Voldemort's side - why not change it a bit. It does not have to be as hateful and horrible as Dumbledore makes it seem. You've already made it AU by having her pureblood (which i love).
I really think it's great - I love their relationship. Also - i love stories when Lucius approves =)
I'm a sucker for the 'dark side' not being as it actually seems. You've already inferred, pretty heavily that Hermione takes Voldemort's side - why not change it a bit. It does not have to be as hateful and horrible as Dumbledore makes it seem. You've already made it AU by having her pureblood (which i love).
I really think it's great - I love their relationship. Also - i love stories when Lucius approves =)
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November 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well so great as dark Hermione is,I really can't see her turning against everything she has known her whole life.
If her adopted family raised her with love then she would know muggles are just as good as pure bloods.
If her adopted family raised her with love then she would know muggles are just as good as pure bloods.
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July 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
sometimes the stories where hermione finds out shes a pure blood can be a little cliche, but i like this one a lot...
i actually dont mind which side she fights on, i will continue reading regardless, however i like the idea above that voldy is controlling her dreams, if you write this in i would love for hermione to find this out then as a result remain neutral and have draco by her side.
harry and ron have been a pair of infuriating idiots, you've written them both well.
i wouldnt cram the story full of side bits either, for example hermione finding out shes preggers or anything i think that the direction that your going in at the moment by just concentrating on the upcoming battle and hermiones parentage is a good combination, i wouldnt mind if she made a few more friends in slytherin house either, crabbe and goyle maybe? pansy? i want her to feel a bit more at home in her new house...
anyway brilliant start, i implore you to continue with this, ile be sad if you abandon it, ive just spend and hour reading this when i shold really be working...
i actually dont mind which side she fights on, i will continue reading regardless, however i like the idea above that voldy is controlling her dreams, if you write this in i would love for hermione to find this out then as a result remain neutral and have draco by her side.
harry and ron have been a pair of infuriating idiots, you've written them both well.
i wouldnt cram the story full of side bits either, for example hermione finding out shes preggers or anything i think that the direction that your going in at the moment by just concentrating on the upcoming battle and hermiones parentage is a good combination, i wouldnt mind if she made a few more friends in slytherin house either, crabbe and goyle maybe? pansy? i want her to feel a bit more at home in her new house...
anyway brilliant start, i implore you to continue with this, ile be sad if you abandon it, ive just spend and hour reading this when i shold really be working...
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July 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm really hoping you won't make Hermione turn to the dark side. It's your story, but I'm just so anti death eater. Great work by the way!
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April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The journal entries were interesting! Great chapter and please update again soon!
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April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was very reveling but I am wondering is Voldy manipulating Hemione's dreams preparing her to ber his weapon. I only hope that Draco help her manage it.