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February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it, but why did he tell her to go home to get rest, then tell her he wanted a divorce?
Well I'm off to read another chapter.
Well I'm off to read another chapter.
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February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think that Ginny should go with her mother. As far as I'm concerned Bill and Charlie are the most important Weasleys, besides Ginny. Because if you read any of my stories, you'll see that I like to put Ginny and Draco together.
I really like your story, will you email me when you update?
arhpss35@yahoo.com
I really like your story, will you email me when you update?
arhpss35@yahoo.com
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February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, it always impresses me when someone who's native tongue reads better than others. I read over your explanations in chapter four and understand a lot more that is going on. And OOC means out of character. Looking forward to another chapter!
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February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah she probably would be in good shape chasing after seven children, I'm sure she probably had to do most of the work too, her husband was probably about useless.
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February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a very good story. I'm really liking the molly/lucius pairing.
*grins*
I've always had this soft spot for Gyrffgirls/Slythboys ships.
Anyways...looking forward for your next update,
Lexy
*grins*
I've always had this soft spot for Gyrffgirls/Slythboys ships.
Anyways...looking forward for your next update,
Lexy
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February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for clearing everything up for me. I love this story and good forward to the next installment.
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February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! Can you please email me when you update? I can't wait to see where this goes. Is Narsicca alive or dead?
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February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
As much as I'm enjoying this, I'm having such a problem believing it. Canon-wise, (and yes, every fanfic is ooc, no matter what the author tries to convey) Molly is so dearly in love with Arthur, and Lucius Malfoy is so far away from their beliefs. Molly is a large, matronly woman who dotes over her children and husband like no other (Except maybe Petunia)and it's hard to picture her doing anything but, or looking like a sexy minx. Now add that with red headed Weasleys turning blond with grey eyes. I think one or two of these variables would be believable, but the whole package strains my imaging as I read.
Please don't take this as a flame, it is entirely my own opinion, and as I said, I am one of your many readers (You have a load of hits on this, I'm shocked no one else is taking the time to gift you a review) and I like it, and I want you continue. I guess I'm hoping for more of an explanation as to why this is occuring and see your point of view on these two come to a head. Straying way too far into OOC land makes it more and more unbelievable, and we want to believe, trust me. Thanks for writing, do not let this discourage you in any way. I am no fantastic writer myself (I only write porn for pities sake) so take it as you wish.
Nunny
Please don't take this as a flame, it is entirely my own opinion, and as I said, I am one of your many readers (You have a load of hits on this, I'm shocked no one else is taking the time to gift you a review) and I like it, and I want you continue. I guess I'm hoping for more of an explanation as to why this is occuring and see your point of view on these two come to a head. Straying way too far into OOC land makes it more and more unbelievable, and we want to believe, trust me. Thanks for writing, do not let this discourage you in any way. I am no fantastic writer myself (I only write porn for pities sake) so take it as you wish.
Nunny
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February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol tomato head. Let's see... grey eyes, blond hair... Ohmy! Eagerly awaiting another chapter, I just can't guess on my own!