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January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like it!!
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January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great idea! Your fic is good but you need to break up your paragraphs a little. A good beta can whip it into shape in no time. If you need one look at the links at the bottom of the page and join the beta group. They are a very helpful bunch. Keep up the great work.
schedule
January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
a very good start to a story that could be more exciting as it gets going, keep writing
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January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it update soon please,
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January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hi, interesting start, a little shakey on some grammer (plane not plain) and the chances of hotels and plane flights were a little to convienient.