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for Make It Right

by Extraho

schedule June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Tom's certainly got a different take on his past than the one we hear from Dumbledore, hasn't he? Interesting. And lol at Hitler being English and friend of the Riddles. I want a bird like that to do my shopping - cool idea! So I'm wondering how this is going to pan out - I'm guessing not Happy Ever After?
schedule June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter! It explained really well why Lilith is still drawn to Tom despite the rape and I like the dialogue between the two girls. Also, you draw Keith so vividly - he turns my stomach! Fab work - I hope your exams went well & you have more time to spend on your writing now.
person misslala
schedule June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well that was interesting. :) I am glad to see you updating again. :) Look forward to more.
schedule May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon I love it.
person jetuke
schedule May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just love it. Hope Tom is good and the bad husband gets what he deserves. UPDATE SOON
person jetuke
schedule May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a great story, though I don't really understand why he raped her in the first place, but who cares. I love this story and can't wait for more. Update soon please! You rule!
person misslala
schedule May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hrm this is taking an interesting direction. I am interested to see where it goes.
schedule May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting - poor old Lilith, though, that her marriage is so awful she can be friendly with her rapist! An intriguing idea; I'm curious to see how this develops. I've never read a loved-up Voldemort before, lol. I've been to Crystal Palace and you describe it really well.
person misslala
schedule May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I would be interested if Tom comes to dinner and Keith finds out that Lily is Tom's daughter. Though I think it is believeable that she would want to be with him again...strange psychological mess, hehe. I like it, I am so glad you are continuing this. I am really enjoying how it flows now and the story comes to life in the minds eye. :) Great job! I patiently await your update.
schedule April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I'm pleased to see this up again...I wondered where it had gone. Next chapter, then, chop chop! (Claps hands impatiently).