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for Make It Right

by Extraho

person dragon37
schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The last chapter was really good. Eagerly awaiting the next.
person misslala
schedule June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Boy I hope that was Lilith that was shocked by his magic and not someone else. lol
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The only story with Harry/Fenrir I found so far is Corroption by Pagan Strega http://pagan-strega.livejournal.com/
person misslala
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Welp I guess Lilith isn't going anywhere! LOL Not with glittering green eyes to meet her at the door :P
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ha ha, Dumbledork - I've never heard that one before. Tom is taking such an interest in Lily, it's quite touching. I always think it must have served his dark purposes very well that he was so good-looking - as you say, people are oddly more inclined to trust attractive men. Oh dear - Keith is going to go postal now, isn't he? I hope he gets what's coming to him.
schedule June 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, interesting! How is Tom going to justify associating with a Muggle to his snobby Slytherin friends? Has he got something nasty brewing? Is Lilith right to trust him? Many questions...looking forward to the answers.
person misslala
schedule June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok, so now we are caught up! :) I am glad you went back and took your time with things, the story is opening up more and we are getting to know the characters. :) I look forward to the need chapter!
schedule June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Can wait to read the next chapter. Is Tom going to ask about her hand?

Emma
person dragon37
schedule June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it. I lost it for awhile, while I switched out my computers, but I'm glad I found it again. I really think that there should be happy ending. Keith should really be fucked over. I'm desperately awaiting the next chapter.


Jeannette
schedule June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story! Its interesting to see a Voldemorte before he became, I guess, what everyone expected of him? It will also be interesting to see how you generationally tie him back to Harry, grandfather to grandson. I look forward to your next chapter! LillithXTom = <3~!