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for Make It Right

by Extraho

person Saffy
schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm going to be sad if this story has a sad ending...make it a happy ending please =)
person anniea
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my gosh this is so amazing i found it on a fluke but it is just absolutly amazing. i love it! had i know this was such good pairing. please update soon *kisses AND hugs*
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my god! O_O


Poor Tom. Evil Dumbledor! This explains so much. :(

Can't wait for your next update. Keep up the good work!
schedule February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Is Keith ever going to DIE? I hate him ugh... great chapter sad but great update soon!
person snv3
schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading this story tonight and I love it. I can't wait for the next update!
schedule January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
update soon please!

schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! More updates!


I love this story.
person jaz
schedule October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH she is good!! i lov it!! i hope that they work it out i lov your tom!!
person Ana
schedule October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
like it, you're doing a great job with the interaction between tom and lilith. tom's relationship to cassander came as a surprise though and to be honest i wouldn't mind if you got rid of him. but that's just me:)


schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not fair! I want to be in Corsica.

Tom's interaction with Lily is so cute. I wonder if the older Lily remembers anything about her 'pretty' second Daddy? Still haven't got a clue how this is going to pan out - keep writing! Even on holiday!

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