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for Make It Right

by Extraho

person poohbear74
schedule October 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I do not flame people but I felt I had to write this!

I know that it is hard to write something even if the words don't come.
at least try to finish what you start.
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hate u :(
person Saff
schedule June 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I feel like i missed something here, isn't she meant to be getting help for Lily???
schedule June 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update! Is tom ever going to find out that Keith has raped his mate and hurt his daughter?
schedule June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have been waiting forever for an update, please, please, please update soon!
schedule April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon I REALLY wanna know what happens next!
person liz2008
schedule March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is a good story please update this story soon.
person Fortuna
schedule March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Why there is no Slash warning? I hate slash!
schedule March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG I loved that chapter, is Keith going to be killed by Tom? Please, please, please update soon I LOVE this fic a LOT!
person kallipso
schedule March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
More I must have more. I love this story. I hope that you continue to write it. I have a feeling that tom is going to be so pissed that nothing is going to be able to hold him back now. Please keep it coming.