rate_review Reviews

First...that song you used...was it by Placebo? LOVE THAT BAND!!! Anyway, OMG, HARRY CAN'T DIE! YOU EVIL, EVIL PERSON!!! Hope you write more soon!! POOR HARRY!

Slashy Snitch

OMG!!! Must have chapter 8! Where did they take him? He can't be dead!

Oh, but you did a good job. It was yummy. ((and I just now realized you're the same author as War of the Heart)) I'm so caught up in this fanfic, wanting to see where it will go and so forth. I've always liked writing emotional characters, so I like the way they're portrayed. Keep it up ^_^

Looks like the slave showed the master in the end! Soooo need chapter 6!

Okay, I like it. Really, I do. It's a great story and has a marvelous theme to it.

-But-

I don't like that part at the end. Where Harry's inside Draco. I'm assuming that people that are reading this that know me, are probably just saying it's because I hate Bottom!Draco. It's not. I don't like it because it just doesn't fit. The way you wrote Draco, well, Draco wouldn't have just let Harry fuck him, and Harry wouldn't have been so bold as to either. I don't know, it just sounds wrong to me.

All in all, great story, but...I don't know, the end of the fifth chapter kind of got to me. This isn't a flamer, I swear. Great story. If you want to write me, SlashySnitch@aim.com.

Slashy Snitch.

please finish this story i really good

LIKE THE STORY, BUT YOU COULD REALLY NEED SOME PARAGRAPHS/

What has Harry gotten himself into? Need chapter 5!

Soooo need chapter 2! Will he listen? Does Harry stop?

wow! I normally don't read stories like this but I have to say, this one really has me hooked! Again, just a tiny bit of editing to be done on paragraph work (just because, if the paragraphs aren't too long and bunched together, they're easier for the reader to read)... Other than that, great story!
Please update again soon!
Stef