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for Xmas gift for Harry

by elfhybrid

schedule February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hm,I don't want to continue this one, but I can make another one, similar like it,but longer?
how's that?
person Star55
schedule January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was kind of.... sad in an aspect. It just goes to show the many different ways people can react to their friends coming out. I've always believed that Harry and Draco are meant for each other, no matter how many times i get told its not right. Whatever! Harry and Draco will always be my OTP!! lol

Nice ending though. I'm glad Harry got ti kiss Draco in the end =)

Good work~

~*Star*~
schedule January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
sad, cute and funny at the same time... hmmm, interesting combination! ;)
Needs a bit of beta-ing in the aspect of paragraph structure but other than that, great job!
If you want any help with the aforementioned beta-ing, just give me an email and I'll see what I can do...
otherwise, good job, keep it up!
Stef
person ZooArmy
schedule January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was kinda short. make it longer please. can't you expand it and continue? it would be soooo cute!
schedule January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Want chapter 2! What did Harry give to Draco?