schedule
September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so great!!:)
schedule
February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Heya! :D seemed only right that i should review your story as you are a great supporter of mine :D THANK YOU! This chapter sounds like a great start, i'll be looking out for the rest of it :D
Vixen xxxx
Vixen xxxx
schedule
January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes, short but promising...:)
Just one suggestion, some paragraphs would be easier to read then a large page of tekst.
I'm wondering how your story will turn out!!
DJ
Just one suggestion, some paragraphs would be easier to read then a large page of tekst.
I'm wondering how your story will turn out!!
DJ