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for Fallen from grace

by Pickles

schedule September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey pickles, Another great chappy, but no malfoy...pouts and sighs. Oh well u know what u doing, and that imbecile RON, I hope he dissappears real soon (Ok, I know u cant do that cause it will spoil the story, but i can think..hmph). Anyway, I was wondering something cause if u following DH in the manner the story progresses then Malfoy would not meet hermione until Malfoy manor and thats really far down the line, but I am really interested to know if u r gonna do that or change it up to? I just simply cant wait. I am glad at harry's decision to go back to the dursley's and Ginny is really pushing her luck, and I hope things get shaky soon, cause we all love a broken and bruised malfoy to do the right thing in the long and fall for the girl. oh and dont forget my email scarlet_witch_extreme@hotmail.com so we can talk about the beta-ing and oh here some more cookies for you *Chocolate chocolate chip*. Talk to u soon.
Scarlet
schedule September 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey pickles, I am glad u loved my last review and yes I do beta for a couple friends over on FF if u want me to help I would be honoured, so u can drop me a line at scarlet_witch_extreme@hotmail.com. SQUEE!!!!!!!!! thats so kool the u want me to beta. Now, I am busy reading your chappy so I will review separately,I was to excited by the offer so i had to respond...lol.

Respect
Scarlet
schedule August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey pickles, thank you for acknowledging my review, and I only speak the truth, it is a very brilliant and unique twist to the books, and I loved the way u manipulated the events of the actual to fir in with these original creations. I love it. I love the way u make the chapters nice and long and the way everything seems to flow into one another, and i seriously cannot wait until this story starts to evolve and grow into the actual interaction between Draco and Hermione, but i will wait patiently cuz its worth it. Oh and u do deserve chocolate for the new chapter and thanks for giving me some as well, I always love a good bribe...lololol....oh i mean chocolate. Please keep the intenstity and the raw emotions coming and geez can Ginny and Ron be anymore GITS, I soooo love to hate RON and you making me love to hate GINNY too, lol. Please keep the glorious work coming and update soon. Again I am honoured for the onsite nod.
RESPECT
Scarlet
schedule July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this story is deep, raw, brutal and unexpected, not your run-of-the-mill dramione, alot of drama and the bitchy ginny and ron, oh I wish fleur and hermy bitch slap somebody quick...lol. Things are going to get messy, and please update and keep up the amzing story, i actually feel sorry for draco and snape, and I really, really want to see how this story is going to evolve. So please keep up the amazing work and update very soon.
schedule April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooh poor draco and im honored that you mentioned me. ya. write more great chaps please!
schedule April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoy this story. And though it is not totally original so far, (not a bad thing, it is a Dramione fanfic) it still has a different spin to it. I like how you are writing Draco's character. Plus, the details of the revel when Draco got the mark - disturbing to say the least - but believable.
schedule March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yes i usually hate ron and ginny so hahhahaha. loved it btw!
schedule March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i cant wait for an update! i neeed more. pretty please!
schedule October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
im always glad to help!!
schedule October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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so great want more