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~giggles ~ that was a great start .... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel

Oh I'm glad you posted the chapter so soon!
Great job it's coming really good.
You do a great job with the humor without going overboard with it.

I can't wait to read more. It seems like it is goin to be hilarious. Please update soon oh pleeeaaasssseee

Write more i love it. I love these kind of dm/hg fan fics :D

MORE MORE MORE

Reeeaally good first chapter!
I've seen this storyline done alot, but you've made yours have some awesome potential!
Hope you'll have a new chapter soon for us.

THANKYOU so much for all the reviews!!!
(i really wasnt expecting any!!!!) this has come as a pleasant surprise!!!!! :-D

I will have to haev a look at these other fics (and make mine completely different from them so no one thinks im stealing ideas lol)

I didnt realise this plot would take so well, but im glad it has!!!

Don't worry, I'm a quicky writer
(because if i dont write something down, its likely to go out of my head so i cant remember it lol)
so there will be plenty of updates for you!!! :-D

Thankyou for reviewing and i hope you continue to enjoy the story!!
Thanks for being so kind!!!

xx

I love it! it's really different!! more soon!

Jayna
xxx

A Dire Straits fan i see! Me too!
However, you say that this is your first story - but I've read this one before. Either you wrote it a while ago and this is a repost or perhaps I am remembering someone else's story that is almost exactly the same. Is it a repost?

Oh I like it please update soon it's so cool.

Great start. Keep up the good work. You may want to check out Avari20 and her fic Future Parents Program. Your story lines are very similiar though just different enough to keep you out of trouble;). I hope you update soon.