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January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really good chapter! they seem long, but for some reason it leaves me wanting more (That's a good thing). Great job, be proud of yourself this fic is doing well because of your imagination. Please update soon and I can't wait to see what happens. Oh! I almost forgot, I have a fic called Baby Boomers at ff.net and it is similar to yours, but I wrote it before I found this fic. If you have time could you please read and review it, it would be and honor for me, you are a very good writer.
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January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Draco is being so bad and inconsiderate to her...not helping at all. I'd slap him!!! Such a git!!!After all, it's as well his kid!Men..what can I say?
I feel terribly sorry for Hermione...I can imagine how she feels.
well..maybe thry'll start to help each other with the crib?
Can't wait for more!!
I feel terribly sorry for Hermione...I can imagine how she feels.
well..maybe thry'll start to help each other with the crib?
Can't wait for more!!
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January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is great! I can't wait for the next installment! I usually don't like reviewing since I never know what to say, I'm just along for the ride and I have to say this one very unique ride! I don't think I've seen a fic like this one at all, and I've read a few Hermione gets preggers ones. I think I like the take on this a lot more since it's all out in the open, I'm sick of reading about the Hermione that hides her pregnancy and then all that drama of the discovery, it gets old after the first time reading it. This however is so much more, my only question is what happens after the class is done, do these kids disappear? And are the sentient beings or are they the magical version of nano pets? I think that question alone makes it worth reading lol. I mean as a parent you get pretty attached to your kid so I'd like to see how this story unfurls and what happens when it's all over since it's supposed to be fake >:D Keep it up as I check back everyday to see if there is a new chapter!
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January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just finished chap 6, and I loved it. You saved the best for last. Malfoy's reaction to the package was hilarious. thanks for giving me the pairs list. I love how they are paired, and look forword to seeing how they all get through this project. Anyway another great chap, update soon. You rock!!
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January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh LMAO! Draco has to set up the crib and playpen oh my kodak moment! This just keeps getting better and better come back soon!
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January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This has definatly turned out to be the most hilarious fanfic, as well as the most original, I have ever read. I love the Hermione/Draco fanfics, and this is turning into one of my favorites! I can't wait to see how Draco and Hermione's relationship progresses. You may want to double check your spelling errors though, cause I caught a few throughout the chapters! Looking forward to updates!
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January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am glad that you cleared up why Luna was in their life skill class. It was not until you mentioned it that the inconsistency dawned on me, but still thanks for clearing it up! I wonder if they use anything different than cribs or playpens for their children in the wizarding world, since Luna was puzzled at the packages, but maybe she is just wierd. Anyhow, thank you for pacing out their relationship and making it more believeable -- I do enjoy the more realistic choice than the typical "Bang!!! Now they are in love." Keep up the great work!
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January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL Draco and power tools!!! Look out Hogwarts!
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January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This fic is decent so far; except it reminds me of the Future Parents Program (I believe was the name) and that was a FANTASTIC story!!!
Anyway, if they are pregnant for 2 months, then 1 week roughly equals 1 month of pregnancy. Please remember this when you're writing. It's been 1 day and Hermione's breast are growing? Very unrealistic. And you said they would be seeing 'bumps' in a few days (which would be comparable to about 3 weeks pregnant. There is NO one who starts showing after 3 weeks of being pregnant. Sorry, to be so critical, but I have 2 children and so I know about pregnancy.
And don't worry about being OoC; it's Draco and Hermione, so unless you are a wonderfully gifted writer, them being together is going to be OoC NO MATTER WHAT. Although, I think Draco is very OoC in general. Sorry, but I simply cannot see Draco being that disrespectful and disobedient to a teacher. Plus, Draco Malfoy looking completely disheveled? Not on your life. True, him being a "Sex God" is very un-canon, but I don't remember him having wonderful grades as being canon either so feel free to fudge that bit. HOT!Draco makes for goooooooooood reading, LOL.
Anyway, if they are pregnant for 2 months, then 1 week roughly equals 1 month of pregnancy. Please remember this when you're writing. It's been 1 day and Hermione's breast are growing? Very unrealistic. And you said they would be seeing 'bumps' in a few days (which would be comparable to about 3 weeks pregnant. There is NO one who starts showing after 3 weeks of being pregnant. Sorry, to be so critical, but I have 2 children and so I know about pregnancy.
And don't worry about being OoC; it's Draco and Hermione, so unless you are a wonderfully gifted writer, them being together is going to be OoC NO MATTER WHAT. Although, I think Draco is very OoC in general. Sorry, but I simply cannot see Draco being that disrespectful and disobedient to a teacher. Plus, Draco Malfoy looking completely disheveled? Not on your life. True, him being a "Sex God" is very un-canon, but I don't remember him having wonderful grades as being canon either so feel free to fudge that bit. HOT!Draco makes for goooooooooood reading, LOL.
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January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved Malfoy in this chapter!! more soon
Jayna
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Jayna
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