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for The Baby Project

by TMaria

schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter!! are you going to have you're reviewers vote on whether it's a boy or girl or have you already decided? i personnally hope it's a girl, can you imaging trying to live with draco if he won that bet!!lol, keep up the great work!!
person brayzen
schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it. Your description of the emotions that they are experienceing are great! I look forward to future chapters! please hurry!!!! Here have a cookie (::)
schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! I love their moment at the end- perfect!! I'm glad I inspire you:) Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
person moxie
schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes, I like how this story is moving along. I can't wait till the baby starts kicking!! I wonder er how Malfoy would feel if something happened to Hermione? Like cramping or premature pain. And I am very curious whether you will make the baby a boy or a girl. And if he/she will have his looks or not. More please!!
person Forgetful Love
schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So Sorry it took me so long to review, I have been away from the internet. I was so happy when I saw that there were like five chapters for me to read. I love how you are making Draco slowly realize that he is going to be a father. Please updates soon, will Hermione get any of those what I like to call super kicks? The kind that feel like you are having a contraction, but your not.
schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this fic so far, but I find some of the spelling errors distracting. That's due, however, to my being an English teacher. As for Blaise's last name, the books write it as "Zabini" and I think that the names' spellings should stick to canon, but again, that could just be me. Again, I do enjoy this story and I hope there'll be another chapter soon.
person Sessh's Sango
schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I still absolutely love your story! I read the 6th book this summer and this morning when I woke up I was thinking about this story and I couldn't remember if this was in the book or if it was on this site. lol It was almost sad that I was so ditzy! Anyways keep up the really good work. :D
person Pumkin
schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i'm going to get whiny here just fore a moment. please, please i need more chapters. k i'm done. keep up the good work. i can't wait to see how draco dose when the kid is born.
schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry I didn't realise how far behind I had fallen with your story. This is a good story. Original plot. Thank you for writing this. waiting for more.
person karina
schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love the story so far. is there going to be a pair with twins? are malfoy and hermione going to argue over baby names? plz update soon!!!!!

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