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February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
totally brilliant, i actually clicked on to draco and herm fics by accident and this has definitely become a firm favourite. can't wait for more.
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February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
COME BACK!!! COME BACK!!! YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE!!!! Please! please, i beg of you! Update again!! Just once!!!! pleaseeeee
Jayna
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February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely wonderful! I sat down and read the entire thing today. Great writing. I had found a story a while back about Draco and Hermione having a slightly similar experience to the one that you are writing about. However, I am much more fond of this one. It's really enjoyable thus far.
I am also quite happy with how you've managed to keep everyone in character even while slowly starting to change Draco and make him more "aware" of everything to be able to facilitate change. I absolutely loathe stories where the characters change overnight into something that would take quite some time to happen.
Anyway, I can't wait to see what you have in store for the upcoming chapters. It should be quite amusing to see Draco's take on everything when the baby becomes a real, screaming being, and also how Hermione and Draco interact with the changes that they are bound to encounter.
Keep up the great work! Looking forward to an update!
I am also quite happy with how you've managed to keep everyone in character even while slowly starting to change Draco and make him more "aware" of everything to be able to facilitate change. I absolutely loathe stories where the characters change overnight into something that would take quite some time to happen.
Anyway, I can't wait to see what you have in store for the upcoming chapters. It should be quite amusing to see Draco's take on everything when the baby becomes a real, screaming being, and also how Hermione and Draco interact with the changes that they are bound to encounter.
Keep up the great work! Looking forward to an update!
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February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok~so you like to hear what i don't like about this story? here it is: that it transfixed me so that I forgot about another hw assignment...so i lost like an half an hour of sleep for it. why do you have to write such a wonderful story? lol, i love it so far please do update sometime soon! oh and b4 i forget, you spelled grenade w/ an i~ it should be grEnade...just fyi
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February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Again, fantabuloso!!!! i can't wait until she actually has the baby. you know the labor room havoc...lol...and then when he has to get up at night to watch the baby. hhehehehehe .....please hurry with an update....hopefully a double dose :)
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February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The story is great, and I am really enjoying it....FYI though, you have quite a few spelling errors.
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February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE DAVID EDDINGS!!! When I saw "Pawns of Prophecy" in your story I screamed. That is one of my favorite Authors!! It is so cool that Hermione is reading him!!!
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February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i hope to never be the target of those schoolgirls but go hermione for defending her pride even if some of it was bullshit! and how fast do you write these chapters are you a computer or sommin? not that im complaining^^
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February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*claps* I enjoyed this chapter very much, I just love how your whole plot is coming together. Its like watch a TV show/soap oprea. Well I can't wait for more. If your having the students give birth the conventional way, then I have something to suggestion, you can use it if you want to. While Hermione is giving birth you could have Draco there scared to death for Hermione. Well, after the birthing process is over and the baby is all cleaned up, I thought it would be very sweet if after seeing the baby Draco gives Hermione a kiss, which takes them both off guard. I don't know I guess that is a fluffy dum idea, but you can use if you want to.
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February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love reading your story! It's amazing. Can't wait for the next chapter.