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for The Baby Project

by TMaria

person tank
schedule February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is frightenly good lol really good potrayl of child birth and pregnancy which is funny and cute as well so hurrah for you!
schedule February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter.
I'm glad the bet wasn't a thought in his mind. Will he be taking pictures and sending them to grandpappy malfoy... lol
I guess if they would have thought it out a bit more the would have given the girls the shots so many a day instead of all at once.
Now the fun begins...
person Jules
schedule February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't stop myself from squealing! I want more chapters!!
schedule February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yippee, the baby is born! I'm glad it's a girl (I always see Draco with a baby girl)Now what is her name? I liked that video as well (I'm developing a collection of faves now) Loved the banner- it was so cute!!
person Sessh's Sango
schedule February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yet another FABULOUS chapter! I didn't expect them to go into labour and have the kids, but sure happy they did. :D I'm just curious though, are they able to do "it" now? Or are they going to have to hold off until they graduate?
schedule February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can honestly say that you have blown "Future Parents Program" out of the water with that last chapter. Fantastic job!! *hugs*
schedule February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
~lol~ wow .... i love it and im glad draco is showing is softer side out side their room and cont carring .. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

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person BuffyXO
schedule February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! How can you possibly think that your latest chapter is not good? You did an excellent job in relating how child birth must have been for both of them. Although it was interesting to see things from Draco's perspective, I would imagine that Hermione's would be really difficult to do, seeing that she was in so much pain. I almost cried when Draco called them a family. He really came around when it mattered the most. Good for him and great for you and the upcoming chapters. Please make their foray into young parenting be very realistic, i.e., breast feeding = painful, crying babies = cranky parents. I am sure you will do a fabulous job, I just wanted to give you two suggestions for another layer of realism. Keep up the great work and thank for letting me know of the new chapter. :)
schedule February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely lovely. I loved the latest chapter. I especially love the way that Draco finally broke down and accepted his emotions. I'm really looking forward to them being thrust into parenthood and the intersting predicaments that I'm sure will ensue. Great job, keep up the awesome work :D
person dracoluvah
schedule February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love how Draco and Hermione's relationship has subtlely changed over the course of the last few chapters. I also love how Draco's heart is now open because of the love of his child. Having gone through pregnancy and childbirth these 7th years are going to need major couseling when the project is over and the baby disappears. It's going to break my heart! They are already so in love with their little girl.

But once again, thank you for another great chapter!