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by TMaria

person JaynaM
schedule February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved it!! This chapter was sooo good!! I really can't wait for the next one!! please update again, just once!! PLEASSEEEEEEEEE

Jayna
xxx
person Forgetful Love
schedule February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, it will be fun seeing the sexual tension between them get worse. update soon.

FL
person Kimberly
schedule February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OHHHHHH..I just can't get enough of this story. So sweet, and subtle. I just sigh at the end of every chapter now. So wonderful. I get the feeling that Draco and Hermione are going to end up wanting a real relationship with a real baby? Those poor girls having to go throw labor and delivery...ouch...hahaha..keep up the amazing work..truly wonderful.
person moxie
schedule February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
And so it begins? Please? A little smut? A kiss? Anything?
schedule February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved it. I think it was right on par with the rest of the chapters, so don't worry about not having done your best :) And I love how you're still keeping Draco, well Draco. It's very "him" to read her journal and be a bit sneaky. Even though he's been showing emotion and becoming a bit less of a jerk you still manage to keep a few of his Slytherin qualities out in the open for good fun :D Anyhow, great chapter, can't wait for an update!
person Anon
schedule February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aw, you have such wonderful ideas. My favorite stories are filled with warm-fuzzies, so yours must be one of my faves, yeah? ^_^ Ah, now that I see Airyn, and actually I've thought this before about other fics similar to this one, I wish there was a way the babies could become real through some ceremony or miraculous happening. It would take such a load off the mind if all the babies didn't have to disappear, cuz it's so sad. :( Only the babies who are loved and cared for properly, of course! LoL Maybe not, you know, Neville and Pansy's baby... I dunno; I hope you know what I'm getting at. LoL Anyways, wonderful, love!
schedule February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon.
person BuffyXO
schedule February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
As you can tell from my user name I am a huge Buffy fan myself and do enjoy the Spike/Buffy pairing, which is why I also enjoy the Hermione/Draco pairing. I liked this chapter as you can tell that it was necessary to set things in motion for our couple. I still wonder if the other boys are having romantic feelings for their partners as well? If so, I wonder how Hermione will take Ron's forming relationship with the Patel sister. Also I do not think that these pairings were done randomly, as Dumbledore has a hidden agenda for everything, or at least that is what I choose to believe. Keep up the fantastic work and thanks for continuing to email me when you have posted a new chapter.
schedule February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*snickers* Silly Dumbledore... doesn't understand, but its to be expected. ^_~ Ah we are getting closer and closer and I cannot wait!!! Please update really soon and give Draco some love! *feeds muses brownie bites*
Love and a Peace,
Kates
schedule February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awwww draco final see that is LIKES mione .... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel

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