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by TMaria

person Sessh's Sango
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 17 was most definitely satisfying. :D I absolutely loved it! :D I can't wait for when they start to get a lot more touchy touchy feely feely. lol
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is so absolutley fantastic i just love it so much cant wait to see what happens next
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love this so much its absolutley fantastic when i first saw it i was laughing so hard such a great idea and it gets better with every single chaoter. i'm so dying to find out what happens next
person Anon
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah, another great chappie full of cuteness. My, my, aren't you sly? LoL I'm excited about the smut, too, but I think you're taking the right steps to building to it. In this story, it makes since for it to take a while. So kudos to you for not being too eager! ...lol Oh, and I also wanted to say that I think your writing has improved since you first started this fic. Just an observation. :) Good job, love! Thanks for the regular updates!
person Kay_Rage
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say that i've been reading since the beginning and i never had the chance to review.AWESOME STORY! just felt like saying that. please please continue.and cut longobttom a break.
person Kay_Rage
schedule February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
absolutly brillant! cant wait for more. ps. cut longbottom a break.lol
person sheryne
schedule February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey,
that one was brilliant.It 's so cute to see how Malfoy reacts!
I wana know what hapens next!
Thank you for the writting
See ya
person hannie
schedule February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome totally addictive keep updating!
person Lexy Malfoy
schedule February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice update. The breat feeding scene and Draco's reaction made me laugh. And once you mentioned the journal I just KNEW that Draco woulld take a peak. *grins* He's Draco after all.

Looking forward to your next chapter,
Lexy
person Pumkin
schedule February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the chapter. it was a little short but it was informative. glade to see he is starting to understand his feelings. update soon please. you write well and i would recommend this story to anyone who asks about reading it. keep up the good work.