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by TMaria

person blondiexoxo
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey I really like this story. Hope u update soon. I wanna know what happens.
person Chavela
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not bad.

It is getting better than what I had originally thought from the beginning, which is nice.

Since, so many Dramione stories have been so badly written and so damn disappointing, to the point where it is turning away from it.

But these new chapters, 15 and 16, are making me like this fic.

Keep up the good work.
person pickles87
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The chapters are great! I'm glad that Malfoy is coming around. Waiting for more. p
person angelpiphi
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I honestly thought the chapter was great, a very nice interlude into Draco's thoughts and allowing your reader's to view the whole scene (because after all, Draco and Hermione were not the only ones participating in this project.) I found as a writer that you can't "wow" everyone with every chapter, sometimes you have to include a little background story to tie everything together. Plus, you want to continue justifying Draco's feelings for her so that it is more believeable. Overall, I think you are doing a wonderful job. *hugs*
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww, the baby finally makes their bond stronger....so cute...

I want some smut!!!! It has been sooo cute all the time....I want them finally get it on! They so belong together...
person Zaya
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY!! I can't get enough...i've went thru it four times already.. I can't wait for the next chapter. I love how your story flows, it's great! The way Hermione and Draco's relationship evolves from enemies to something more seems so natural.. I can't stand reading stories were the jump from one emotion to the next without the transition phase..to me that's the best part :):) I was about to quit on Herm/draco stories...they just weren't cutting it... you got me hooked again!! ;) thank you and keep up the amazing work!! Please :):)
Zaya
person Britt
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love you, did you know that? I love airyn's name! can't wait for the next chapter!
person egella
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AHHH you have me hooked I check each night to see if you have an update, I'm the lurker sort ...however your story is so good I just HAD to review! I've read a bunch of dramione that is overly contrived or happens way too quickly 'from the first time he saw her on the train that year...' can we say riddiculouse? So I guess what i'm trying to say is thank you for a propper build up and that I enjoy reading a hogwarts parenting story that is unique and has its own individual spin. Haha I love your draco, he seamed to be a bit of a softie this chapter... but I supose it fits and daddy draco is a yummy image, just something that gets me about cracking him with the miracle of life. And while we all love the smut, personally dramione smut with no story just doesent have the same sort of satisfaction i think for this pair the story IS them overcoming the divide and animosity between them, so i say spot on and keep up the FANTASTIC work!
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter- I loved the way you switched between their points of view. I'm already dreading the babies disappearing....maybe they won't???? Please???
person Curious
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So I was wondering... First off love this story! It's very realistic, and very entertaining! Bravo. My friend and I did wonder however if any of the seventh year girls were suppose to be virgins? lol Actually to be quite honest my friend went on a tirade about it, wondering is it really that unlikely that a seventeen year old wouldn't be a virgin. My friend's a proud 21 year old virgin and loves to tell people... Anyway she and I were wondering since the girls had to go through the actually birthing process how you would work a situation like that out. Cannot wait for more chapters!