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by TMaria

person Corinne
schedule June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey there!

A fabulous with a hell of a plot! :) Very easy-reading (even for not-native-english-ones like me! :))
I love the way you write life into the characters and let them act.. I can almost feel what their thinking.. even it is very often a very complicated one - being about stubborn by nature.. both of them! I suppose you're not that fond of Ron, eh? ;) But I definitely agree the way Hermione acted in ur story .. I couldn't imagine her defending Draco in front of her friends and all the others at that point..!
I'm dying to read further.. and please, give it a happy-end!! I couldn't stand that story without Draco and Hermione getting each other! :)
Keep it up!!
Warm regards from Zurich (Switzerland)
Corinne
schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, so I wanted to take a minute to tell you how much I adore this story, I have literally spent the last 2 evenings reading it. The plot, storyline, character development... everything is excellent. I love it. I love the internal torment that you have put both Hermoine and Draco through, and I am enjoying how you are playing out their individual insecurities, from Draco's reluctance to let go elements of his upbringing to Hermoine's struggle to accept the changes in Draco. I know that there are a lot of stories similar to yours out there, but yours is by far the best Dramoine Babyfic I have had the pleasure of reading. I say Bravo to you. I am eagerly and quiet desperately awaiting the next installment.
Don't keep me and your other readers waiting too long...
person Anon
schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
All caught up. :) That was a brilliant read and the only thing I'm sorry about is now I have to wait until the next post. Thank you for sharing your story. :)

I also hope that your stepmother's health is firmly on the mend, my best wishes for her and the family that supports her.
person LuckyC
schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
When I read the Buffy/Spike reference I just threw up my hands and screamed. I'm a huge Buffy/Angel shipper. I know you mentioned before that you're a Buffy/Spike shipper but it's tricky of you to incorporate it into the story. I know it's only a couple of lines and I don't know why but it just made me really... "GAAAAHH!!!" I guess it's because I haven't had any BtVS in a long time. So when I read that part it just made me sad that Buffy and Angel aren't together :[. And I just skimmed the last few parts just so I could leave you a comment about it.

Anyways, as for your story, I have to say that it is simply amazing. I really like how you took it slow with Draco and Hermione. I agree that it just seems a bit weird to just throw them together and have them instantaneously fall in love or whatever, but I guess it gets to the smut faster ;]. I guess your story just gives me that warm fuzzy feeling when I imagine Draco and his darling little princess together. That scene you wrote where Hermione found them asleep together gave me that 'awwwww' feeling xD hahaha.

I'm trying to catch up since I found your story two days ago and I've engrossed myself into this. Since I didn't have work today I read from last night to 3 this morning and sleep took over. But I had to leave a comment because of those couple of lines you wrote. (I don't usually like to leave comments because a simple 'that was AWESOME!!!' doesn't add up to how much I actually enjoy a fic and I don't know how else to explain it... and I think I'm just babbling right now, but I do really like your fic!)
person Anon
schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gah!!! Here I am at chapter 24 with tears in my eyes again as I read Pansy's letter to Draco. That was just beautiful. I'm so pleased you put this angle into your story. It's not something I have personally experienced but one of my girlfriends went through hell because of PND. I'm glad that my friend and indeed Pansy got through the experience. :)
person Anon
schedule June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, now I'm waaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyy back at chapter three and I can see you're worried about whether people think you've copied another story or not. I haven't seen another story like this here. Granted, I haven't read every story here but I certainly don't recall anything like this but I imagine you've been told that several times over by now. :) SO on to the important part -

Love it, love, love it!! I agree that Draco would be more interested in beating Hermione than being snarky to her, his reputation means more to him than having a dig at her, that's just an enjoyable sideline (although not for much longer, I'd wager - LMAO) and now I'm going to get back into the story.

person genna
schedule June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't think Draco is ever going to get Hermione for real. I think he will need to marry her and forsake his family in order to satisfy whatever standard of manhood which is expected from him.

How and why is he willing to sacrifice his entire future for a child who won't last beyond July and a woman/girl who will not acknowledge him to her friends?
person Mooneflowerz
schedule June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back! You've been missed!

Wonderful story! Can't wait for more
person Anon
schedule June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Here I am at chapter 14 and I can't believe I had tears in my eyes when Hermione delivered her baby. You had me scared for a moment when there was silence and a huge sigh of relief when their baby cried. LOL I guess I got into it more than I thought. :) I love that Draco felt so much more than he expected to. And poor Madame Pomfrey having to attend to all those births at the same time. I wasn't expecting that. It's a pity those babies couldn't magically appear without having to go through the birth process. It's hardly fair. LOL But unfortunately very true to life which was the whole point of the course. LOL
person Pumkin
schedule June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
so we had to wait forever for another chapter but it was worth it. can't wait for the next chapter.