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by TMaria

schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Pleasssssssseeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!! update soon.
person JaynaM
schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Soo sorry i couldn't review on the last chapter! My internet was down! Anyway!! LOVED IT!! I cant believe you did that to us it was soo evil!!!

Jayna
xxx
person Vanillesky
schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh my god...!!!!!! I promise you you gave me real shakes up there... It's incredible, I loved the way Malfoy held her, how he was hesitating before kissing her.. your writing is amazing, I just want to read more.. update soon !!
person Extraho
schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oooh, that was so mean of you!!
person Britt
schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
evil cliffie
person Ally
schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woooooooooo, i finally juz caught up. from chappie 12. :D I think i did good. I LOVE IT WRITE MORE. Yay malfoy is getting closer. Love is in the air (soon)
person Willow Eris
schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! Why does it not suprise me that Malfoy was the only guy to have changed a diaper? I like how you have wored in all of the diffrent family dinamics, from multiple children to an almost single parent (Neville) and everything in between.
person Scarlette
schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I have to say I am impressed with this. When I first started to read the story, I was skepticaly. After reading The Future Parents Program I was sure that this would be some kind of cheap immitation (no offense). However, I have to say that this story just flows with originality. I do think that it would be better if you had more present-time interraction between Draco and Hermione and less flashbacks. Although, I admit that the cliffhanger effect does just make me want to read more. Which brings me to my final statement- UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!! Great story!

-Scarlette
person jennyheartsx
schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this and the previous chapters were my favorite. majorly cute <3
person juls
schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This fic is very good =). And I happen to like long stories.