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for The Baby Project

by TMaria

schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i was thinking, finally!! and then airyn cried!!! why!!!!!!!!
person moxie
schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh my word. that was *hot* and definitely worth the 19 chapters. looks like Draco got his answer...you did a really good job here. and now we know why they can't do the deed...Airyn! I hope Hermione doesn't get a Madonna complex and totally regret what just happens because she thinks as a mother she can never do things like that...
person megan
schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the theme of the story, continue your good work.. I am also excited that it will be a longer story.
schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update
person Jess
schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your story!!!! Draco is such a great dad! It's sooo cute!!!!Write more soon!!!Please, please, please update soon!!
person Britt01
schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You never dissapoint me. :D *winks* plz update.
person carlie
schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
its a good story but one thing that has been bothering me is that you have them refer to hermione as a muggle when they insult her. and just to get the record strait shes not a muggle, the correct insult would be mudblood because while they don't like her she does in fact have magical abilities. a muggle in a non-magical person. she's magical but with non-magical parents. if you could fix that it would be great. =]
and please continue your story is great.
schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
man .. how will they act over break ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

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person pixi
schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omfg
this is definatly one of the best fics ive read, i just havent been able to tear myself away. PLEASE WRITE MORE X.O I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!
person carlie
schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i kept on reading.
it's all good now.
strike my last review.
and please continue writing.
=]