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by TMaria

person mandy
schedule February 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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person Jenn
schedule February 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi!

I just wanted to tell you that I absolutely love your story!!!
I think it's amazingly realistic how you describe what the baby's doing, what they're doing and things like that - a HUGE compliment for that!
I'm so going to continue reading this story...I swear!

But I have to say it is rather cruel to not update for that long.... :) (Although I can see your motives)

Anyway, keep going just like you do now...because what you're doing is GREAT!!!

xox,
Jenn
person Marik's girl
schedule February 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please continue this soon; It's very well written and a wonderful story; This is the best Draco/Hermione story that I have read so far. Update when you can.

~ Marik's girl
schedule February 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for you to come back :( please make it soon!
schedule February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey Shellie!
Just wanted to let you know how much I've enjoyed this fic so far. I've read the whole thing in one fell swoop!
I'm enjoying the character interaction and development of their relationships. If I was to make one criticism though, it would be the spelling and grammar mistakes. I recommend you get a beta reader and maybe a brit picker too. Usually if the spelling and grammar are not so good it puts me off reading after the first chapter but the plot line and great characterization have kept my interest. Well done!
I would like to know when you've updated so an e-mail would be very much appreciated.
Blessings
Amethystique x
schedule February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'l have you know that I have just spent my evenings for the past two days, reading this story. I stayed up til nearly 11 last night reading, and I would have continued to stay up until I finished if I hadn't had to get up and go to work at 4 am this morning!

Anyway, I just finally finished reading what you have up so far, and I just want to say that I really like this story. It is very original and worth the time it took to read it from the beginning. The only thing I would suggest is the story would be much stronger (as in the sites that do contests would probably eat this up!) if you would enlist the aid of a beta to look over your work, and help you spot and fix mis-spellings and such.

BUT... that said, this is a fantastic story. Totally original and a fun read! PLEASE update as soon as you can, because I am really looking forward to finding out what happens next!

Shiloh Darke
schedule February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No, no I can't hold out that long :-(
But I'll do my damndest and try XD
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait util you start udating again.
person Anon
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person shelagh
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok so my internet connection was down for two weeks and I finally get to check your updates only find you have posted daily. Wonderful work!!!! I am so impressed with this fic. Take all the time you need for RL but hurry back soon I need my fix. LOL