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for The Baby Project

by TMaria

person tank
schedule March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good chappie and i admit that scene from 'big' was probably the best part in my opinion kinda like grown ups can kid around to!
person Lexy Malfoy
schedule March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, my dear. You know I love your stuff!

Looking forward to your next update!
person Line
schedule March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I must say I love your story, it's very beliverble. And I love her parents, their baby, the name..everything it's a fell good story. very nicly done.

Best regards Line
schedule March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
the film was the first thing, that got into my mind, when i read the line with the music...
i'm sorry to tell you, but there's no piano part in beethovens symphony no. 9. there are pianoconcerts by beethoven (and serenades like the moonshineserenade - i hope my translation is correct)... but my favourite pianoconcert is written by tschaikowsky (no. 1 in b minor) and this one is really, really hard to play... my skills never reached that (and never will)
person JaynaM
schedule March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh i loved it! and i can't wait for the next chapter!!

Jayna
xxx
schedule March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, it just keeps getting better and better with each chapter. I can't wait for an update :-D
person anon
schedule March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like the story, it's good and unique. Just one thing that slightly threw me off is that you wrote Hermione's thought process in Draco's dream sequence.. seems just strange considering the dream was his and should really just follow his thoughts and visual understanding of Hermione.. seeing her blush, not knowing her thought process through the blush.
person Jules
schedule March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You're back! I absolutely loved chapter 24! it's so cute, pansy is finally growing up :]
looking forward to more chapters!
~Jules
person ccino49
schedule March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was well worth the wait. I laughed like anidiot when I read about what happened in the toy shop. I could picture it in my head. LOL. I hope Draco and Hermione talk soon. They really need to tell each other what they're feeling. I also liked the way you brought Pansy back in. Gald she's doing well. I don't like her character but I do know PND and wouldn't wish it on my worst enemy. Been there, done that, got the t-shirt. Hope next chapter is up soon. Looking forward to it.
ccino
schedule March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yays and Whoop! haha, I love that movie, and think it was really cute that you added the piano scene between Mr Granger and Draco :-)
And yays for some closure about Pansy, although I almost wish Draco didn't react in a way that made hermione *over*react :-/