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for The Baby Project

by TMaria

schedule May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just caught up in your story a few days ago and I think I forgot to leave a review. But here it is now and you can be sure to get one with every update! :D I love how original this idea is. I heard that there's another story out there about some sort of baby project but it's rare enough to be so much more enjoyable to read this then anything else! The relationship between Hermione and Draco is very believable as well. You did really good at changing their feelings gradually! I love it!!

Great update by the way! I loved that Hermione was the one to get drunk! For a moment at the begining I thought you were going to have swapped roles and I was like "great, another drunk Malfoy hitting on a sober Hermione" but you surprised me in a very good way! :D Can't wait for chapter 27!
--Toxic
schedule May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person Anon
schedule May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Isn't Hermione still breast feeding? Drinking will seriously endanger the baby.

Good story other than that.
person vanillesky
schedule May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey! thanks for your notice and update. This chapter was really good. I loved the drunken party, and I think that solving the "RON-problem" was a good idea, because now Hermione is 100% sure that she doesn't want him. Can't wait for next chapter. Hopefully they will do something more than just lying around!!
person JaynaM
schedule May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Hermione!!

More soon

Jayna
xxx
schedule May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
T. Maria, I have thoroughly enjoyed this story. It is a very interesting concept/idea, one that you have taken time to enrich with information for those who have never had children. Your story is well written and easy to follow. I love romantic/star-crossed lovers
person Fia
schedule May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Soz i haven't reviewed before but i wanted to tell you that i love your story and say pleaseeee review soon, oh and by the way when are malfoy and hermione gonna get it on the suspence is killing me!!! xxx
person Prongs
schedule May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow.

I had my doubts when I saw the title, but you have done an amazing job! I agree with the comment "I laughed like a looney" haha I really hope you make a repeat appearance of Seamus' character lol (in the humor respect) Your transition from enemies to friends to i dont know whats is beautiful and I applaud you heartily. All I can say is that I'm in love <3<3<3 Oh ohoh and that I stayed up until four in the morning to get to chapter twenty-five hehe *blush* Loved it!! PLEASE Update soon!
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg this is sooo good!! keep reading. i love your fics!
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
excellent as per usual keep em coming