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OMG...that was so good...and you know what? This story is so good, I forgot there was supposed to be sex in it...

Thank you for thinking of us poor poor readers before leaving on your wonderful vacation. (Please send a postcard).

I think you are doing a wonderful job on this story. An since they are in their last year of school things should be taken slow. At least he realises what she's ready for and not. Most males at that age are wam bam and was it as good for you as it was for me...

Also I think there are a few other sites that would enjoy your story.

Waiting for the postcard of secret info on the next chapter.

I hope you have a wonderful time.

Great chapter! About your question, I'll just say that I was a bit long before we got some touching involved but the passion was there and that's all that matters! I understand you taking your time, even if it's really frustrating... just like Malfoy is frustrated, I guess. ANyway, the little scene was great and I cetainlty didn't expect the "I'll show you you're not ready yet" act! But it's a good idea, I just hope she'll be ready soon, and that they'll finally be in the open and not in denial, especially Hermione! Good holidays, and don't forget to write..
Magali

well that was different-but great! i liked the different aproch i do look forward to your update in two weeks but have fun on vacation! i also really liked that they are starting to come clean with each other even if it was in anger besides now hopefully they can start fresh and really work at it and be completely honest with one another! :)

im not bored with it cuz u dont have the sex.. i like the building up to it

OMG, you are making the sex scenes even more passionate by taking it slowly. Just as in real life, the anticipation is part of the pleasure. I adore this story and check twice a day to see if you update...lol. You have so much talent, you should consider your own original story and trying to publish it.

Wells its about damn time that they went at it. Now all they need to do it actually have sex. Oh well. Update whenever you get the chance.

not i dont think that bc its your story and its your pace so ignore anyone that tells how to write it.

First off, wow! That was an amazing chapter! I can't even begin to describe how much I liked it!

Secondly, you can be sure that I, for one, am not in this for the smut. That's what one-shots are for. I love the storyline you have going! It's so captiviating and so original! I love it a lot! Besides, the longer we wait for the smut the better it'll be! And that's a damn fact! :D

--Toxic

to answer your question, i love your story and it is not getting boring for me i can't wait for you to add more chapters. i don't care if the sex is not there because i just love the story plot.