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hi!

i stumbled upon your fic just today, around 1 in the afternoon to be axact. now it's quarter to midnight, just finished chapter 28. boy, can you write. ^_^ kudos.

you mentioned that you also posted this in FF dot net and got replies that they were getting bored because the sex was too long to come... well, just goes to show some people are shallow, maybe they should look for a PWP fic if they're just looking for sex.

i like the fact that you go into detail about the characters thoughts and feelings making it a more interesting read. also, you're really good with cliffhangers! XDDD

you mentioned earlier that you're making a shift in the story when it reaches chapter 30... i just can't imagine what else could you do with the story... so that's one thing i'm really looking forward to.

have a good vacation and will be waiting for your next chapter. ^_^

PS:
this is the first time to leave a review a fic here in AFF. ^^

That was hot! I like when they go slow, especially when Hermione is a virgin because it makes it more real. I love this fic and can't wait for more!

This story is not about the smut... otherwise that would be a PWP, which your story so is not. I love your story and how you take care to truly get to know the characters and their mindset. I love your plot and I am enjoying the ride! To the others who are anxious for the smut... well... just ignore them and their whorish acting. If they cannot sit through a story without the characters going at it like bunnies then why are they reading a great fanfiction with a plot? I love your story and I look forward to your update!

Love and a Peace,
Kates

thanks for the update. your doing an awesome job. keep up the good work. i like the way your doing the story. if people don't like it they don't have to reed it. hope you have a good trip. update as soon as you can.

just excellent keep on writing!

Great job so far! And by the way, I'm kind of impatient for the smut, but a good storyline makes it all the better. Your writing style is still fantastic (and it's inspiring me to try to write better quality stories. Yay you!) and I hope to see a lot more chapters. Keep up the good work!
Christi

Well ShellBell you have so done it again! You've written a kick ass awesome chapter that was definitely the cats meow for me. Not because of the SMUT either! It was because it was mushy...it was a breaking point for Draco...a new step in the relationship. You know I love your chappies and I obsessively read them lol...I aint here for the smut! However there are some who are and if they don't like your pace then :P to them. I think a story is indeed supposed to be a story...not hard core smut, and I think you are doing a superb job of telling that story luv! Your story is super awesome and I have been addicted to it, and it my fix, since I first read the summary. Just keep doing what you're doing and ignore everybody that razzes you about the smut! Ya jerks!

-Leslie

Ok, this is probably the best DM/HG fanfics I've ever read. And to answer your question about it being boring, I truthfully was never bored. I mean, sure, when I'm feeling a bit "randy" this fanfic didn't help much... BUT usually, when I start reading a fanfic, once the deed is actually done, I usually become bored with a fanfic. I know thats bad, but it's true. So the fact that its building up makes it all sooooo much better, because it keeps me WAY more interested. I was sad when it hadn't been updated in a long time, but I'm so glad you started up with it again. You're such a talented writer, and I hope you keep it up! Have fun on your vacation! I'll be looking forward to and update in two weeks or so! ^_^

-A big fan!

not post for two whole weeks? no! i shall go through withdrawls!! i love this story. i like how draco has evolved and changed. i like how he is now more responsible and thinks as a man in love and not as a man who wants to get off. i would like to see them "do it" already, but i also like seeing how the rest of the story evolves too...sex changes things and i would like to see them fall more deeper in love. but i would like to see them shag too! good job! have a great vacation, i am very jealous!

T.Maria, WOW!!!! Awesome Chapter. Please Keep up the GOOD WORK!!! I love this story, I have since I found it in Mid April. It was one of the reasons I