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Hey darlin, I love your story so far. I like the fact that you've been building up to the sex, that you've established both plot and characters, instead of just shoving the two of them into bed so fast the real plot is lost. Some people only want the smut, but good stories, good writing, do not need it. Quick sex can be a cover up for plot holes and shoddy planning, which you are not suffering from. Get to the sex whenever you feel that it's time. (Of course you write so well that I won't quibble if you decide to put it in sooner rather than later). I'm looking forward to reading more of your story, keep up the great work. Don't forget, half the kids who read these stories are just looking for a cheap thrill and a semi decent byline. On the plus side, you've kept them reading, regardless of the lack of sex but mounting sexual tension. I know I'll keep on reading. Can't wait for the next chapter!

-EditorDee

that is a fantastic fic u've got on your hands....good job...

I really do enjoy how this STORY has developed. I try and explain to my husband that thinks that fanfic is only about sex, that it's about a story ... a STORY. Now yes, PWP has it's place, but I do enjoy reading about these characters.

I also think that I'm glad that Draco just didn't go for the sex. He cares about her and wants her to be ready. This is a "real" relationship. I like that your brave enough to show one. Thank you!

First, I'm glad to hear that your Step Mother is doing better.

I'm so glad you've come back to this story. It has been worth the wait. I look forward to reading what you've posted. I don't know how many chapters you have left, but I'd love updates (Laubratt@comcast.net)

Great chapter. I feel sooo bad for them right now!

hey im the one from harrypotterfanfiction.com but i didnt think of it till now woman who are pregnant are supposed to take prenatal vitamins i dont know its just a thought if you wanted to add it or something but they start them as soon as they know they are pregnant or should at least i love this story, i wish their were more like them ive only found like 2 besides yours

oo i loved this chapter it was so sweet i decided that as the chapter come out on HPFF ill review them there bc youve already seen and commented on these but i liked this chapter to much not to review

I really love this story!! It's about time they finally get together. Keep up the good work!

I really enjoy this story. I'm waiting for the sex to happen or course, but I love the build up and the whole story. And I love stories with babies ^^.
Well, keep up the grat work and update soon.
Oh, and could you email me when you update? Thank you.

-Becky

PS- Have fun on vacation!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

i think it's good, that it's not about sex in the first place... if i wanted to read that, i would have chosen a pwp.
it's good, that you develop the story and the characters, you make them seam alive...
of course i am curious about the first time of those two, but they had a lot of 'first times' yet: first time speaking with each other, first time not getting into a fight, first time kissing, first time ...
i'm looking forward to the next chap, but in the meantime relax and don't get burnt by the sun *gg*
vic