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by TMaria

schedule June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i loved it and i hope your mom gets better!!
schedule June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great as usual! i can't wait for the update!
schedule June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just LOVE this story, it is worth the wait. I hope everything goes well with your mom, good luck to you both.
Can't wait for an updaten:)
-Lizzy
person Lady Saiyuri
schedule June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay sorry I didn't send a comment. Great story I am hooked. Its not boring like alot of extensive stories that i have read who lose sight of the plot an go off in tangent. I have a couple questions though. Is it just me or does Hermione's parents remind you of hermione and draco? and if so are you doing it as kind of a forseeing of hermione and draco's future after the fic? also another thing i am just curious about. apparently in the fic hermione and draco have grown to truly love there "daughter" but my question is how could the headmaster allow them to do this project (not just hermione and draco but the rest of the students) knowing that allthough this would cause much happiness and maturity would also cause even more heartache and grief after the "child" dissapears. Also I wanted to know that aside from hermione and draco . . . will the other couples end up with there significant others? Is there a connection between the characters and the people chosen as there significant others besides the "grades"? I hope you return soon with a chapter ready at hand. I encourage to keeep writing as beautifully as you do.
person TiffANY
schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi T.Maria,

I just started reading your story the other day and have finished it

Well up to chapter 29 anyway!

I adore chapter 29

It is AMAZINGLY written and I love the way Draco tells Hermione to say his name

It is so sexy!

I love the story
person Persephone
schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good plot. I appreciate that you use correct English when writing. It always annoys me when authors don't use correct punctuation and proper grammar. The characters are true to form. Great job!
person raffie
schedule June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
loved your story :) please update as soon as possible
person marie
schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hi i loved your story :)) and to think i accidentally pressed it before because i thought it was a story i wanted to reread but then you got me hooked and i stayed up till 9 in the morning just to read from chapter 1 to 28 :P i have school the next day so that sort of screwed up my sleeping pattern but im not bitter it was really fun reading your story and i love the way your taking it slow with them because they do have such a long history of hate/loath for each other :P :)) okay talking too much :D just wanted to say your doing a great job :) and please tell me when you'll be posting a new chapter :D

p.s. um...the whilst is kind of distraction..i soon realized it was while but it took me a while to get it...haha.. nothing big just a repetitive misspelled word i think :)
schedule June 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God, that is quite possibly one of the best fics i have ever read. I am a Harry/Draco shipper myself but i decided to take a walk on the wildside and have a look at the other pairings. So glad i did! That was amazing and you have no idea how angry i was at my computer (of all things) when there wasn't another chapter for me to read. Please, God, let there be another chapter soon. I have to know what happens so badly!
You are a brilliant writer and you have put this so eloquently. The story is, as i now realise, so long because it needed to be, not because you wanted to torture us readers. I love the way you have built up their relationship slowly, showing the gradual changed in both of them. I like that there is a good balance between the smut and the more emotional side of the story. Please keep it up!
person wicked
schedule June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you are forgiven i understand but please send me an email the minute its posted at tichjy2006@hotmail.com hope ull deblock soon! ;)