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July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
is it me or every chapter is better than before!this story if ggggrrrrrreeeeeaaaatttt keep it coming!
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July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story!
I read up to 29 straight through! o__o!
<3 <3 I hope your step-mum is doing better. Can't wait until the next update.
BTW. You spelled Chapter 29 numerically instead of twenty-nine. ^_^;
-Bells
I read up to 29 straight through! o__o!
<3 <3 I hope your step-mum is doing better. Can't wait until the next update.
BTW. You spelled Chapter 29 numerically instead of twenty-nine. ^_^;
-Bells
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July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
loved the chapter. we're glad you're back
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July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWWESOME chapter !!!! Perfect! I hope you'll put chap 30 as soon as possible ! ^^
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July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well im happy that you are out of you writers block and i hope that your step mom do better and stay better also :D
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July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
in response to your question in ch 28.Waiting for the sex isn't boring but there was a point where they seemed to be going throught he same motions. I want. I don't. I want. I don't. That was boring on boring for a little bit but its not anymore now that they're being honest. So don't let thier comments bother you.
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July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"There was something missing about her....
It was him."
That part was really good, you see him softening slighty and the Blaise thing was a nice touch.
It was him."
That part was really good, you see him softening slighty and the Blaise thing was a nice touch.
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July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well I only read a few paragraphs of this chapter (15 i think) but I must say its nice to see two people who seem to have such a care for each other without sex having to be involved (because lets face it in the real world that doen't happen). And it's killing me that I'm getting so attached to thier baby, as well as they are (well from what i read he is) and its not even real in the story, but I have a feeling that migt change... :)
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July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I do enjoy how slowly thier relationship is forming. I hate reading these stories where within two chapters they are jumping in the sack and that just makes it unrealistic and I love how Malfoy is reacting because guys do actually act that way. The feel of having a baby inside someone they care about and then having it there is a strong feeling for them and its nice seeing it well written out.
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July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh yay i so love this bloody story! hurry and update (when you can of course, i hope your stepmum is ok! :D)