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by TMaria

schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love it update soon please
person Moo
schedule July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just loved the last chapters and you're completely right when you say that they cannot directly become friends after they hated each other for so long... I hope they will get friendlier again, if only for Aylins sake.

person Ashleigh
schedule July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!! I cannot wait for more, you are a genius writer! Please, send me update emails!

chattyash11@hotmail.com

Ashleigh
person Pumkin
schedule July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok so you warned us before we started reading but COME ON. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA. ok i'm done. very well done but did you have to write it like that. I can't wait to see the next chapter. Each one gets better and better. Keep up the good work and don't mind the rants we'll get over it.
person pickles87
schedule July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The letter was from his father?
Mean ending? Cliffies..
Great chapter more please.
person apple_blossum
schedule July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gah! The suspense! Arg!! Hermione.....*sigh* more please!! HUrry hurry!
person marie
schedule July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
woooow still amazing :D
though i do feel bad that they got into a really big fight it all just makes it seem so real and like how (some/most) relationships go...and the letter from the dad, he was bound to find out right? i love where your going with the story :) i'll be waiting patiently for your next chapter :D haha you got me addicted

thanks for telling me when you've updated this fanfiction :) its greatly appreciated.
person misslala
schedule July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think what you did was perfectly acceptable! Hermione would defend Ron, because that is what Gryffindor's do. :) It's brilliant! I do hope they get it resolved soon, they were doing so well! Can't wait for the update.
schedule July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon.
schedule July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.