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for The Baby Project

by TMaria

person Ellanath
schedule August 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am so sorry to hear about your mum. I wanted to let you know that I so love this story, and, yes I wish to read more. I know when the time is right you will surprise us all and write another chapter for all of us here to read.

May the fondest of memories of your lost one stay with you always.
person wicked
schedule August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
tichjy2006@hotmail.com
well i understand my mom had the same operation where they had to remove her uterus so i hope that your step mom will do better and dont worry so much bout the fic we all do love it and wish it to be complete but your family comes first.
good luck :)
person Anon
schedule August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i hope your step-mom gets better.
person Samantha
schedule August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey sorry to hear about your mom. I do hope it all goes well. We all love this story, but you're focusing on what is important to you now, as you should, and I'm sure we all understand. I just lost my uncle, so I've deffinitely run out of steam for my writting. Either way I hope you will start posting again once things are back in the clear for you. I send my heartfelt sympathy to you.
person karush
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hi! i love your story!!!! you kept the characters in character! and that's a hard thing to do... especially with this kind of a plot!

so great job!!!!

just one thing... they dont say "oh my god"/"god"/"Jesus"/"Christ"...etc... they dont belive in the "muggle god" they normally say "Merlin"/"Merlin's beard" and stuff like that... for them Merlin is their "god"...
just an advice...
hope i helped! can't wait to see an update soon!

Karush^-^
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I found this story the other day, and I have literally not been able to do anything but read it when I get on the computer. You are an INCREDIBLE author and this plot line is so unique. I love the way that you have actually managed to show how Hermione and Draco can be together, while still staying in the same personalities of the book. I would love it if you could email me when you post Chapter 31! I will be checking my email daily just hoping to see your message. Again, this is a great story and I know that it is just going to get better as it progresses.

Ali -contagiousbeauty-
person Samantha
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love stories that suck you in. Your story has done just that for me! I have stayed up all night (3:30am on a work night) reading. I can't wait to see more. The why you have evolved the characters is just magical! I can't wait to see what happens next! if you have an update list Please add me to it! I would be heart broken not to follow this story to it's end. Just so impressed with the insight you have but into this story. Excellent job. You need to get out there and not write fan fiction but create the next trend! Got talent!
person Verie
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading your fic since you'd started it and I like it.
You shouldn't apologize.
About your step mom, I'll pray for her and your family.
I hope she gets better soon.
And of course for the updates and messages you can send it to verihappy@yahoo.com. I would love to get them.

♥Verie H.
person mikaela
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hi! i've loved the story so far... hermione is such a... a... argh! i can't find the words to describe her behavior in chapter 30. however i think that was the reaction you were expecting so congratulations. you are a superb writer... you missed one word though that almost confused me, you used 'contempt' in one of the earlier chapters to describe hermione and draco's feelings toward their baby. i think you meant content :) aside from that though, beautiful story and moving plot. i'd like to get those updates you mentioned in chapter 31 please. angel_mika87@yahoo.com

your awed reader,
Mikaela
person **fr
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that's just. sad. I hope your step mom will feel better soon.
Will be waiting until your next update.