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by TMaria

person Samantha
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lol I actually knew exactly how Aeriyn was pronounced ^_^ cause the name appears in Farscape. Good chapter though =) I just love your writting. You portray the intense emotions of those two. That's why I love this pair. They can both just be so intense. Lol and I can't believe Draco actually let his pride go long enough to apologize! Great chapter. I know you said this would be your last chapter for a while, but either way, I hope you post again asap. Lol I just worry every time you stop writting for a while because every single author whom I have ever seen take a break in a story never finishes it! Their break becomes permanent and they either forget about or give up on the story. I hope that doesn't happen here. This is excellent work. Anyway, just waiting until your next post. ^_^ good luck with everything else too, and best wishes to your stepmother.
person Rachel
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Still a great story. Love it!
person Citten
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
first GREAT chapter! thanks for the update. :) now why exactly did hermione have to walk in at that exact moment and rune the best info that could help draco? well maybe it will all work out and he will get the hang of things on his own or they will find another time to talk. well it really is like real life with the interuption happening at the most inconvient time. do update soon and let us know what lucius has planned or will do. lastly DID YOU HAVE TO END THE CHAPTER THERE?!
person Pumkin
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thank you for the update considering all the drama going on in your life. my prayers are with you and your family. i hope all goes well. i have 3 family members fighting different stages of colen cancer so i know how stressful it gets. good luck with everything and try not to leave us hanging so long for the next fun filled chapter. enjoy you Holiday.
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh my lands you must really hurry with the next chapter!!! I cant wait to see what happens next and i'm so glad your stepmom is ok! :D at least for the time being, and who knows what doctors really know anyway (i'm a cna and going to school for lpn) I think they just say what they think you should know and it isnt always what WILL happen just a 'perhaps'
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that's how I've been reading her name!!lol i'm pleased with myself now!! excellent chapter, ooh Draco's in for a treat ;) can't wait till you update, hope you have a good hol!!!
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was such a wonderful chapter. I just love how you convey their emotions. Beautiful.

And what a clif hanger!


I'll continue to keep everyone in my prayers!
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay you updated but how could you leave the chapter like that ... i want more!!!!

Hope your step mother gets better, send her my best wishes xoxoxoxoxox
person Juls
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG this chapter was freaking awesome!! its amazing & i can't believe that u left it like that!! omg i'm liek bursting rite now!!!! but on another note I hope that everything will go ok for your stepmom, & that u have a gd time wen u go away. My best friends mum had breast cancer & i know the feelings that go with it! my thoughts go out to you both! have an awesome time wen u're away & my regards to your stepmom! till then.. i'll be waiting for the next add!
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!! How long i have been waiting for this chapter i tell you, i practically wet myself when i saw you'd updated. I'm glad to know your step mum's on the mend and i hope you have an absolutely wicked girly holiday, theres nothing that will cheer you up more! Right, back to the chapter, loved the end, i tell you what i don't think i'm going to be able to wait for chapter 32, i already know it's going to be amazing. Just know that i'll be here waiting (almost patiently) for when you get back and am looking forward to when you next update.
Hope you are okay and enjoy your holiday,
stay strong,
Fiaxxx