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by TMaria

person luvhp
schedule September 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
SHew! OMG, I;ve spent the last 3 (working) days reading this fabulous fic! It was abit rough in the very beginning, understandably so since you really have to work out the kinks, but once you got into it full throttle, you blew me away! The whole atmosphere of Draco/Hermione in this story is dead-on. When he finally was able to touch her, feel the life inside, then see her on the screen. Then being there with her during delivery and staying the whole time she slept. All of it, was great!
I loved the Christmas Holiday break (maybe not the Pavarti part) and the train station goodbyes with her parents.
So sad though that Lucius is going to try and ruin it. But, taking what Dumbledore said about Love being attached to the Sexual act, I have a feeling that Airyn may not 'disappear' like the other children. Maybe if they love each other she will get to stay??? ALthough that would mean they would miss out on key points of her childhood (namely the terrible twos, LOL)
Anyway, hope your mother is doing well and you are able to update soon.
You're doing a great job, keep it up!!!
person Crittenz
schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have been following this story for awhile. I absolutely love it. However, I don't think that I have reviewed it yet. *Slaps self on the wrist* I hope you write more and soon as I am rather addicted to this story. It's well written and it stayed in character with their love growing really slowly. I think that's how it should be. Please pretty pwease write more chapters soon. Also I hopw your step mom gets to feeling better. Chemo can be a hard thing to go through. =^_^=
person DracoIsMyDarkAngel
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
freaking awesome... is there any chance that you can keep me updated with, well, updates? my email is katytredant@hotmail.co.uk i dont know when you updated last but this is so worth keeping with... its excellently written, Draco was perfect at the beginning of the story and his character has progressed believably too i think, also i really hope your going the way that i think you might be with the whole 'if love is involved during intercourse' thing, it'd be a perfect ending i think to the story, and also leave it open to a sequel maybe too? but then again, thats only if it happens the way i think it might... good work so far, i only have good things to say.
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, i absolutly loved this story so far!!!
I hope you will keep on writing because i really want to know what is gonna happen!
You are a very good writer!
schedule September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love it.
I can't wait for more.

Great Job,
Angel
person Extraho
schedule September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i am soooo glad yoou're back. i seriously thought you'd left us high and dry. i hope everything will be okay at home, and your step mum heals up.
schedule September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!!! i love this one! i just read the whole thing and i love love love it! More please!
person bebita
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love what you have done to the story and i am wondering what hemione is going to show draco. i hope post more offten. I love This story!
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness.. Another wonderful chapter. I can not WAIT to see how Hermione shows him how she is feeling.. muahahahaha... But again, I love the way this story is going!

Also, I will keep your step-mom in my prayers, and I hope everything turns out well.
person Verie
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I will stand by my name. I am really, truly and VERY HAPPY that you updated and your step mom's getting better. I hope she will be much better soon.

About the Chapter, you did it again, another fantastic chappie. :]
Can't wait for the next chap! :]

-Verie H.