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"ONLY HOPE" was originally sung by mandy moore

i like this story a lot. i wanted to let you know that at the beginning of this chapter, you wrote "similie" in place of smile. I'm sure you are a victim of spell check lol.
keep up the good work

Going to add a little piece of my mind. I think the other reviewers were very harsh. Being a writer myself, I recognize their comments as more hurtfull than constructive. You have a great writing style, and I will continue to read your work no matter what direction you take the characters. Being creative and trying out new things is the best part of writing. Good luck. :-)

Hi there,

I'm not being rude but can I point out this is your story so you have to do what feels right for you. My honest opinion is I love it, I liked the chapter about Draco/Hermione better though. In the end do what's right for you! You'll always find people who will criticize your story even if it is the best story on the planet, don't take it all to heart because there are always people who will love it. Again do what you think is right. You have talent, I really like this story.

Des.

You can always do the same story two different ways. I do not know what the rules are for posting different versions in different places, but I do agree we need more H/Hr fics.

I feel sad for both of them but you're doing a great job with this! Although these were short chapters were cool!!!

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may I sugest something? First, i read chapters nine to eleven yesterday and I think it was amazing. I like the twist hermione/draco for the time, because it

Oh my! This is the first time I've reviewed your story -- LOVE IT! I am also a Hermoine/Harry shipper (as well as Hermoine & a few others)....I'm shocked...It's a shame you felt you needed you had to re-do that last chapter. You clearly stated taht you were throwing Draco in as "angst" and I am shocked at some of the reviews myself. Well, the chapter where you had Draco and Hermoine bond as friends -- I enjoyed it! Why not give Harry a run for his money ...it's clear that Hermoine's heart is w/him...In the meantime, she goes through hell alone while he's off doing the "noble" thing w/Ginny!... Don't pay any attention to some people....they should learn to read your notes and not get so bent out of shape because of one scene in a story.

I'm enjoying your story, and I definitely want to see how it all comes out, but I could have so done without the Draco/Hermione interaction. You did warn us, though. I've never bought into the "When I call you names and go out of my way to make you feel like dirt, it's only because I really like you" philosophy--not even in third grade. I don't like it between Ron and Hermione; I really don't like it between Hermione and Draco. I'm curious to see how you'll it all. Update again soon.

Please move this story to the "General" category, as it is not any longer H/HR, and doesn't belong in the H/HR category any longer. Thanks in advance!