rate_review Reviews

Well I've read this story many times over the past year trying to figure out what to say and always forgetting that you didn't end the story. While I can say I am disapointed I can also say you are an amazing writer and this story has alot of potential. It has a great plot I love the story, but the story can only be good if the author is. I'd like to see you finish this story but I understand your problem I've had it many times myself writers block that stupid little bugger is always persistant. But it doesn't help when you lose interest in a story either especialy when there are many people out there wanting you to continue a story. I can't force you to continue but i seriously hope you do. All I ask is you consider it thanks good luck writing, bye :-)

Pity you're abandoning it. I'll admit, it was getting convoluted, but those are usually the best kind if you're combining Real world ideas, real world emotions and magery.

If you're looking for a hand on an HP RPG (tabletop only, noo CBG) drop me a line.

please update soon om dying to know what happens

Please update soon! I love what you've written so far and can't wait for the next update.. though I realize it's been a few months since the last one >_<

I love this story and cant wait to see what is going to happen next so im going to send you my muse and hope that she can help inspire you...lol....anyway please do try to come up with more cuz this is a great story!!!

I'd like to say that your story is interesting but...the way its going, well I just cannot see how you can fix the fact that they are both to have Harry's child. I would advice that perhaps Ginny after seeing that Hermione and Harry loved each other and feeling that Harry was going to break up with her...what if she made up the pregnancy and Hermione's is real? You could have Harry find out just before the wedding. Ginny's relationship with Harry and Hermione can be fixed later on but you have tortured Hermione and in your story she deserves to be happy with the man she loves. Neville could accidently tell Ron about Hermione and Ron being an honest and caring friend... There are many ways to take this story but I must warn you that any unhappy ending or Harry going through with the wedding won't go to well with your readers. I was enjoying this story quite a lot and hope that you continue it.

Don't get discouraged! You've got a great foundation laid already and your writing style is great, keeping the readers fully entertained. You definitely had me tearing up a little! Love it.

Oh my god! You have to keep writing this story! Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Oh, that's too bad that you're stuck. I was just thinking about this story the other day and hoping you hadn't abandoned it. I've been watching for another update.

As for where the story should go, obviously Hermione needs to tell Harry she's pregnant, Harry needs to dump Ginny, and Harry and Hermione need to get married and live happily ever after. (I'm only kidding with the advice--well, mostly kidding. I really can't get enough happy H/Hr endings. Hopefully, you'll be inspired again soon.)

oh, what about this story? please, continue!!!!

keep faith in YOU.

congratulations.