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by leeannpitbull

person Anonymous
schedule August 3, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I love this story can you please  update some time soon.

schedule August 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really love the story line you have going for this story. I really hope you update it. Even though I see that it has been quite a long time. I really want to see how Harry comes to terms with everything.

RossaMarie
person Oyuko
schedule February 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What happens next? I want to know. I know it has been a long time but please continue.
person kneeya
schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think enough time has already lapsed, now is the time for an up-date! Please, I need to know or I will explode, as you can see it's a life of death situation. Thank you. The ramblings of a mad woman.
schedule April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
More please. This is really good so far. I can't wait for the next chapter to be updated.
schedule March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is a great story. i hope you finish it. i really like it.
person pywacket
schedule February 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please update soon I love the story
person Allanasha
schedule December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, um. I like the premise of the story, and what you've done so far. The only problem is that you have a tendency to use more words than is necessary to say what you mean. There are also some run - on sentences, but not enough to detract from the story itself. All in all, it's nothing a good beta can't fix. My suggestion is that you find one, they are really great at helping someone become a better writer. I know I couldn't live without mine. :)

Allanasha ke kiri
person sarah
schedule September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope you are able to finish this story and that your Grandmother is doing better. The story is well written and I am enjoying the plot of Harry being Voldemorts grandson.
person Amy
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More please, this story is awesome! I hope Harry wakes up soon.