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Poor Hermione, I feel sorry for her. Even more sorry for her when she discovers the truth, not only that Severus was the one raping her, unwillingly, but still. He also let her believe that he doesn't want anything more to do with her because of the rape, letting her feel even worse and treating her like a stranger. He can't even find it in his hearth to treat her like a friend. I know he is supposed to be noble, dealing with Draco, "protecting" her in the castle, but I am not sure you can make it beliveable for her to ever forgive him for this many times betrayal without making her looking like a patetic fool. He migth have been able to save some of the situation if he had told the truth at once, but no, a Slytherin can not openly tell the truth. Some Gryffindor currage might have been useful for him sometimes.
I will continue reading though and looking forward for your updates to see where you take us:-)

Oh man Draco was not smart. Severus is going to really blow now. Update soon I am anxious to see how Severus and Hermione work this out and will Severus tell Hermione that it was he that raped her.

Whoa, I am liking this so far. Poor Hermione, not knowing who raped her. :( And Severus not having the heart to tell her that he was her rapist :/ That's sad, but I look forward to more.

Great chapter!

MEAN CLIFFHANGER ;) ... I really like this story It's very twisted and has a lot of potential... But I think the chapters should be longer ;) .. Hope to read more soon!

Well, I liked it so far and I can't wait for more chapters. Good job!

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