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man .. i hope mione give him another go ... please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

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Well I am glad they all took is pretty well, just wait until they find out who the daddy is.

Ch. 10- Regarding your comments at the end of the chapter: I don't think he is too soppy. It is probably emotional overload he is suffering from. The forced rape, the Final Battle, all his emotions concerning Hermione, and then to see Black sniffing around (pardon the pun) - well after so long being a spy and then it suddenly ending, there is a lot for him to deal with. That is my take on your Severus up to this point and it is believable. Now, if you start having him dress in pastels and throwing flowers at everyone wishing them a nice day, then you will have lost me. :)

This does not sound smart, Hermione drinking and pregnant with Severus's child.

Poor Severus. Update soon.

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Oh my, Severus and Hermione sure knows how to make a mess of things. I do have some bad feelings about the drinking while pregnant issue though. To be cynical, if Hermione is having an abortion, the problem is moot, but I can't see how you would be able to ever make them a couple if that is the case. Even if the baby is conceived in the most horrible way, and Hermione did most surely not intend to be pregnant, the baby is innocent and even with all their issues I regard Hermione and Severus as rather decent beeings, I can't fantom them getting together with the issue of an aborted child between them.
Well, I am sure you have plans on how this story will develop, I will have to wait and see:-))

Oohh this is a very thoughful story I hope you can continue

5 stars

OOOPS. Can't wait to see what happens when Severus confronts Hermione about the baby.

Oh my Gods! Poppy got the cups of tea mixed up. It was Severus who poured contraceptive-laced tea on the plants. And meanwhile Hermione drank hers and is going to get blamed for dumping it!